I had fun reading this! Thank you for sharing!

ARGGGGGG... PLEASE CONTINUEEEEE THIS HAS SO MUCH POTENSIAL SINCE THERES BARELY ANY FIC ABOUT LUFFY MEET YOUNG LUFFY PLEASEEEEE

PLZZZ CONTINUE! \(v)/
THIS IS AWESOME!
TWO LUFFY CAN CHANGE THE WORLD~
I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE YA GOT!

Interesting, I'm actually surprised I haven't found something like this before. Apart from this, the only one I can think of is 'The Lives Worth Saving' (a beautiful piece of work, Naruto-based, that you should check out.), all other time travel fics are just 'future memories' time travel.

This should be interesting if nothing else.

This is great a time travel fanfic with 2 Luffy's has potential
And garp accepting x like that wow
Monkey D huh
Sooo awesome
And the way he distracted garp was hilarious
Can't wait for him to meet shanks, will he prevent the loss of shanks arm... But I have some doubts abt that situation cos yonko do not lose arms like that unless they did it to prove a point
And X should maybe travel around after lunch begins his journey.. and help out only when necessary and stack the cards in Luffy's favor from the background
That would be awesome...
Some suggestions..
Your story whatever you write I am already following ya()
And him meeting shanks would be awesome...
You really captured Luffy's personality perfectly
Hehehe()()
Really love it
X the name could use some improvement or getting used to :-P

I actually really like the concept of this story keep up the good work! Although im kind of curious will X(older luffy) travel with lu(little luffy)?

I sincerely hope that this story updates again soon; it's an extremely promising premise, and well-written to boot.

Plz update

Plz update we all await ur new chapters that are soon to come

i love it so much . . . i'm so sad it's been a while since you've updated . . .

but anyways GREAT FIC! you're awesome~

Ok, I really wonder...are you going to countinue this, I really like the idea and such.

This is so ADORABLE! I absolutely adore this fic please, please update soon!

I thirst for more!
~plz continue~

goood!

very good