indead, I can't wait to find out! Well, I can, and I will, but, still, I'm looking forward to the update and seeing how this all goes down, specially with those rumors still going and the race split soon to come down like a hot knife on butter...

It's alive, wow. Looks like we're entering the games story.

An Update and the start of the games main story.

It lives! Nice to finally get the misunderstanding settled. I bet it was Nocturne who set it up...that would be too obvious though and might be someone else.

Nah, I liked the changes, specially Jack's change of attitude. Thanks for all the hard work! We'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

gyaa an update!?

Oh nice, a followup chapter. Not what I had expected to happen, but still very interesting.

Nice lead up to the discovery. This will be an interesting moment indeed.

Ooh, cliff hanger. Nice chapter.

Ohhh... intresting! is Jack Secret finally going to be revealed? Hmmm
the chapter was an enjoyable read none the less.

...I've stayed up way past my bedtime reading this, tomorrow is going to suck, but I regret nothing!

He has died everyday waiting for her.

Great chapter. Have the chapters gotten longer?

Also, when I said different in my last review, I meant it in a good, interesting way.

Man, sorry for not answering your message for so long. I've been busy trying to prepare for overseas trip and some works to do last weekend.

I think this fic is pretty good and has lots of potential; especially with how this Jack is Quasar right now. The event seems to be following the original game too for now, but him as Quasar will definitely shake things up a bit I think so I'm not too worried that this will end up the same at the end. My only problem for now is that Jack feels to jaded compared to the original..which makes sense considering that he lives for a long time but still I think he's kinda missing of what made him a hero back when he was still a child. Well at least his love for Ridley still stays true even after all of that lol

Anyway I've been skipping only a few days (i think?) and you're ch 7 already? :o

Now that's different. Wonder how things will turn out now.