| Reviews for The Kyuubi Twins |
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   Amaterasu53 chapter 9 . 9/22 yay! |
| Lucy846 chapter 19 . 1/20 Its amazing story hope update some time |
| mynameisnotyours111111 chapter 18 . 7/13/2019 why is naruto the same and his sister is powerful. dont you think naruto has to be different but you keep him the same this is trash |
| moonlight46 chapter 19 . 7/13/2019 Thank you for writing an amazing story and letting us know what is going on! Looking forward to seeing more of your amazing writing! |
| BlueSeraphos chapter 19 . 6/25/2018 I would love to help except that most of my knowledge of Naruto comes from fanfic and tho I’m pretty certain about what’s going on I haven’t watched the entire series. Also I’m in my final year at sch and my finals are coming up in less than 4 months. |
| Pat123 chapter 19 . 6/25/2018 the stories go but you got to go back and do a lot of spelling check and on top of that you put Naruto too much in the background of the story at least bring it to light a little more. I don't like how you make him like how you make Naruto to be a dumbass is like almost all the other stories that's out there. stories called the Kyuubi twins but yet the stories is mostly about just one twin. |
| Hetavengers chapter 1 . 6/19/2018 um... isn't Kakashi in his 30s and the twin like in her 10s? |
| BlueSeraphos chapter 18 . 6/14/2018 I would love it if you could update but it’s been a year ( I came here from AO3 cuz I was wondering you had an account here then I went to wattpad. ) |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/10/2017 Great work here! Keep up the awesome work! |
| Valor-Derzod chapter 1 . 6/10/2017 Daaammn. Right from the getgo you give up on trying to build up any relatability with your oc and just turn her into a clone of Naruto with itachis skill. That was terrible in the most awe inspiring way. I salute you. And you formed a relationship between an almost 30 year old emo and a 13 year old in your face Mary Sue You are one fascinating specimen aren't you right out of Stephen kings wet dreams but the illiterate retarded ones. And you decided to beef up your character and leave Naruto pathetic. How is that even remotely possible? How does the guy that wants to be hokage not ask his genius sister for help? Have you forgotten that Naruto himself has genius level intellect? It was just suppressed by the antagonistic treatment he received? How does he get neglected by his only living relative? You're story just doesn't fit together at all. All this shows is your Mary Sue is a bitch. Wonderful job. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/10/2017 Please update |
| Itachi Uchiha chapter 1 . 6/10/2017 "Ryu, your mission is to observe the uchiha survivor and kill him if he falls into wrong hands" third hokage - sandaime... Don't tell me you forgot about the promise to keep my ototo alive. I had gone as far as to even warn danzo about it. |
| LunaStar1995 chapter 1 . 3/19/2017 I love this...more please |
| NeKo19-94 chapter 17 . 1/12/2017 Next plis |
| moonlight46 chapter 17 . 12/15/2016 Amazing chapter! I think it would be awesome to do both, like start with Ryu helping Naruto then go off to help Kakashi -if it is possible. ] Looking forward to the next chapter! |
