i don't know anything about hamlet, but this story is very interesting so far !

I'm so happy you updated this you have no idea. I love the little details, and I'm wondering how Asura ties in. Can't wait for more!

(CONFETTI CANON)
i'm super not coherent but i still wanted to review. soul being a fairy is still the most hilarious and best thing to me. every time it's brought up again in narrative (or by maka saying it) i feel whole and complete inside.
of course asura is a bad dude. of course.
oh, shit is right, my boy.

Its back!
Its long
Its awesome!
Lllllllloooooovvvveeee. Iiitttt!

Ahhh its great to see this update! I really love this AU and story, despite being unfamiliar with the Shakespeare story (sonnet? Idek it might be a play even). I am eager for more! I adore your character development and study; its always so interesting!

oh shit indeed dear Soul. sniffles. no disguise... oh well as long as he gets in, it does make sense that his camouflage magic would be a better cover than just a disguise. looks like they've nearly got all the ingredients then (but Soul must still need a hat, no?). Oh dear oh dear oh dear Asura... whaat has he done this time I wonder... ugh. gotta wait till next chapter. please continue :) ps: stairs... so many stairs... reminds me of DWMA... stairs~

aha the dynamic duo have a plan! we're really getting started now *grins* oh my gosh, you just gave me an image of utter perfection, these two beautiful angels wearing flower crowns, right that's it I'm good set for life I can rest happy thank you! poor baby Soul the world is too evil for him he deserves a hug :3 can't wait! xD please continue :)

I've never read hamlet but this seems super cool! Its really good so far :)

love this!

I really like this.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. :)

ahhHHH. This is really dense with emotion and stuff and it makes for such an expressive read. All of the characters you've introduced so far are three dimensional - but Soul and Maka, especially, obviously, are fantastic.

(YAY, SKULL KID.)

"Maka Albarn; it fit her. It was spiky, guttural, a little unpleasant to say, but pretty written out."
ahHHH I love this bit. Fits her to a T. I've never thought about her name like that before.

There's so much in "cool" and I am a little emotional about it. Once you get someone hooked with a fic you do a really good job of keeping them there. uuugh, the world is so vivid.

I WAS RIGHT ABOUT KID. (CLENCHES FIST)
If there is more speaking to Kid-the-skull, I will be so immensely pleased and amused.

Soul is not into feathery chicks. Duly noted.

"Maka Albarn was not a pet kind of person, though she did secretly have nicknames for her books."
I LOVE THIS

yes, we are always looking for puppies. Never forget it, Soul.

Soul the Fairy is my favorite thing. I just. It's so funny to me and also so good. I was not expecting him to tear into a raw bird but there he go.

I looooove the way you describe things. It's pretty and raw without being purple.