HEY! YOU CAN MAKE ANYONE CURSE! EVEN FUJISAKI! BUT NEVER MAKE TOGAMI CURSE!
MAKE HIM SAY-"...Effing.."
ya know- the 2nd trial?
ok

everytime i try to VA makoto in my head i always get kirigaya AKA Kazuto

im on this chapter-
waiting for them to call kagakure a psychic

what the heck happened to chihiro?
that is my only concern

At this point, I'm really glad I read this fic. The characters have an interestung twist to their actual personalities... or might have been polished to a better degree. Celeste being more concerned or at least sociable with the population, Leon being smarter and friendlier than he was, although I feel that you might have scrapped his seething temper, Byakuya being less of an ass... on times, but what surprised me the most is Makoto and Sayaka. Makoto being the most smart ass around the group, it kinda stops him from being naive, or possibly quite docile. Sayaka's yandere personality is simply the first time I saw in a fic. Almost anyone who have done fics with Maizono involved had her usual character, but this version if her is actually granting one of my wishes. There were also a lot of referrences used here, especially some 4th wall breaks that were used by some.

All in all, I liked how the plot and the interaction going around the fic. Tbh, I didn't expected there would be a killing game at all, but this chapter just proved the existence of the main characteristic of the whole series. I'm looking forward on how the plot goes for the next chapters. Thank you for your hard work!

you have to get sayaka to kiss naegi when they see each other again

Do you enjoy writing walls of texts?

You have successfully created a story wild enough to rival the plot of the original THH. I applaud you.

Yeah, I read this chapter and I only had the vaguest idea of what was going on anymore. Ishimaru is alive? Well... That's surprising. Or, I guess it would be if I remembered he was dead, haha. I think I have some intense re-reading to do. Nevertheless, I liked the chapter, and I look forward to the next one :)

Why didn't they just not open the locker so they wouldn't have to go through with Asahina's trial?

Never thought the day this story would get an update.

Even better, Ishimaru being alive. Now that's a plot twist!

Well then this definitely took a turn Ishimaru is still alive and yet for some reason I'm not surprised that case just so confusing and weird it just made this actually make sense anyways keep up the good work

ah, Sonic Rush was a good game.

Is is necessary to input all that jazz about sega video games and whatnot?— I mean I have no probs about video games it's just that they're so long and boring for most people who're not into those kinds of things. Ugh, I'm only continuing because I like smartass Naegi. Although I'd be happier if Naegi is a loner— prolly like 8man-esque. Because I'd pay a lot of money just to see that. Welll you don't look a gift horse in the mouth. Maybe tone it down a little? I mean it's probably late at this point but meh.

Welcome back, a few more chapters till the end. When will you take Makoto out of the basement?