Sadly I forgot my password and have to type this without being able to use my account... I will rectify this as soon as I am not riding train and typing on my mobile phone...
First off: Did you have german as a course in a class or were you just looking at what the translation of certain words were? Because german is my mother-tongue and my English is not the best.
Well the few sentences you wrote were in part not correct... for example: ”You little shit” would be "du kleiner Scheißer” but again would not be used by a native but to give it an endearing tone... If you are searching for something a 1940 guy would use try ”du kleine Misthure” or something equally ancient...
I hope to correspond further and talk to someone about your brilliant story even though I dont like HYDRA or Red Skull... (WWII gave all germans a bad name for generations...)
feel free to mail me
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You are extremely cruel...I currently have Hakuna Matata stuck in my head.

I think you mean oblivious, all 16 or so times. Obvious usually means not well concealed, while oblivious is more when you don’t notice things. She was oblivious to her surroundings, but the smile on her face made it obvious she didn’t care.

Hey there,
I realy enjoy your story!
As a nativ german speeker please alow me to correct some pheases:

Ficken verdammt noch mal!-Fucking damn it!
This phrase nobody says it - it would go: Scheiße verdammt noch mal - Shit, damn it!

Was, kleine Scheiße?!-What you little shit?!
Here you translate it word to word? I would call the little shit: Göre or Bengel if it's a boy - it's more fitting because he is from the 40s

Ich kann Ihre Bestellung entgegen und bringen es auf Sie, Dummkopf-I can take your order and give it to you, idiot
... und bring sie zum Tisch, Dummkopf (idot you can also say in german)

I hope my english isn' t to horrible
Have a nice day
Yours
Fey

is this whole thing in Johanns pov?

Don't ask me for the why, but a table is set, not dressed ;) otherwise i'm really enjoying this so far :)

I loved this fiction

AMERICA because Freedom and fuck you! haha i laughed for almost five minutes

I'm still half convinced Ginny has something to do with the twin's disappearing. Because her name's on the portkey list. And because she's a bitch, too.

He's so pulling a Megamind.

Damn, now I want to watch it again! It's all your fault.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAH! Elrond and Mr Smith! At least you didn't choose his splendid drag queen persona in Priscilla Queen of the Desert... Lord of the Rings was never the same again...

Holy shit! Steve knows Schmidt's face! 'o'

*cheers* Excellent work Tony! Distraction!

Tony is an excellent choice- he's very good at breaking up the mood having the other three in the same room causes. Plus he definitely having the most fun.

Well shit.

(I /had/ wondered what "Noah Smith" looked like. Apparently, the actual Johan Schmidt pre-serum.)