I look forward to more :)

Lmao I love Al's cracks and how everybody keeps elbowing her and glaring at her in response, and on that note, the scene with just her and Clarke was so great
The way you've written Alex's thoughts of Minerva's really genius, it ties into the story so flawlessly, and she still gives up those worries to risk her life for Octavia,her POV's just lovely. Oh and lol wet Octavia and Alex huddled together on a rock sounds hotter than Octavia in the original scene
Speaking of hot, is that Jamie Chung in the picture, cause I'm freaking in love with her!

Omfg, your writing's so fucking brilliant! Lol at that "Fuck you too," I love the first meeting between her and Murphy you had there, but that's about all I loved about Murphy in this chapter of course!
And I can't get enough of how you write her friendships, first off the nicknames are so wonderful, and the way she reflects on her history and view of Octavia and Finn's even better. Cause of the dynamic you write between her and Finn, I'm liking Finn more than I ever did in the serie!

Oh dude, I'm in love with this already -and I can't believe I'm just now discovering your works and everything

roses r red
violets r blue
this fic is fab
and so r u

BRUH
BRUUUUUUUH
NO BUT BRUH
THIS FIC IS SO GOOD
IM SO TRASH FOR THIS FIC
U HAVE TO UPDATE
I AM DEAD INSIDE
THANK YOU FOR THIS SPLENDID CREATION

AYE BABY I WAS LOOKIN THROUGH THE ARCHIVE LIKE "why are there no good john murphy oc fics im going to die" AND THEN I SAW THIS AND I WAS LIKE
WHAT A GREAT SUM-OH SHIT! ITS MY BAE! AND NOW IM HERE
IM SCREAMING THIS IS SO GREAT
YAAAAAAAAS

This is actually good and i would read more if you wrote

Hey! I literally jumped into this fandom a couple of days ago and yours is the first fic I've read for it. I am already in love with this story. :) I could SO see Alex in the actual show. She fits in so well and I can't wait to see how her storyline continues. Much love friend! :)

HEY LOOK ITS RAY! lol but OMG her being next to Murphy and him constantly calling her sweetheart ugh I love it and her and him and them, otp: stop calling me sweetheart
Can't wait to see what happens with Alex going to Mount Weather

UGH I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see what happens on the ground and when Murphy shows up ;)

Good! I love Alex. Can't wait! (Does she have a blog?)