| Reviews for Mind Over Matter |
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Guest chapter 3 . 7/18 PLEEEEEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEEEEEASE |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/15/2017 Loved the story. Loved the entire concept of soul mate mind reading. The ending had me a little disappointed tho. Maybe expand and elaborate a bit more? (They were just told they might die...) |
Arkytior's Rose chapter 3 . 6/24/2017 Finally! You updated! Loved it so much!, |
Aphraelsan chapter 3 . 6/23/2017 Thank you so much for finishing! It was DELIGHTFUL! |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/22/2017 That was...quite an open-ended ending ahahha. It didn't feel like an ending to me, honestly; I was just literally scrolling down and down, reading paragraph after paragraph, then suddenly it's the end. Maybe you've already directed the story to its 'end' somewhere along the 'It was always going to be them' sentence near the end, but it still felt...sudden? I kept expecting there to be another chapter, but you've marked the story as complete ahahah. Or maybe I'm used to having 'proper resolutions' (ya know with Sherlolly declaring their love and going for round two, all that soppiness ahahah) and this story is a new way for me to see how open or incomplete an end can be! If there's to be a sequel, I'm looking forward to it! You can't just leave it at the soulmate rats being dead so suddenly (and by decapitation? Now that's a head I'm pretty sure Sherlock wouldn't want to receive [yay to puns ;)]) and then that hot but touchless imaginary sex! I followed this story since it came out, super happy it was updated today, and hoping there's a second part in the works! :3 |
amherendeen chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Oooooh! This was so worth the wait! |
scubagurl22 chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Hmm I wonder if that's going to cause the side effects too? All those hormones being released. Love that you had him sneak in though, gotta love a telepathy plot! |
Michaela pendragon Holmes chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Please we need more chapters |
Sisterspy chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Sweet Lord! I love this fic sooooo much! Thank you for updating and...completing?! Noooooooo, honestly if you have plans for a sequel I would be so happy! |
Callisto1610 chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Yasssssss! I have been waiting for ages! Thank you ! This is just so funny I re read it so many times! |
MiLa63 chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Yay! Thank you for finishing this! It took an unexpected turn with the rats (oh Rats!) but I liked how you ended it. Definitely left us wanting more, like the characters! Job well done! |
Sherlocked-in-Tejas chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Wait, you aren't finished are you? You can totally go one more chapter. |
MizJoely chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 The hottest non-sex ever written! So glad you were able to bring this story to a, uh, fruitful conclusion! |
Saphira113 chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 It's funny to see this because I was just rereading a bunch of Omegaverse fics, so you have perfect timing! That last scene was very interesting, admittedly not exactly where I thought you would go. Also, I don't think Molly would ever rip off Sherlock's head. Even if she did start to have some Alpha traits I think she likes Sherlock rather too much to kill him. I really liked the bit where Sherlock admitted that as a child he thought Mycroft could read minds. It was brilliant. |
VioletJersey chapter 3 . 6/21/2017 Damn, somehow them just having hot telepathic sex makes it as worthwhile as the real thing! Such a great way to end this fic! Welcome back Ms Conchepcion! |