This was amazing.

Oh my god, that last part!
Wow, that just broke my heart, but I love it, and I think it's beautiful (in a maybe messed up kind of way?)
This was really good, I'm glad I read it!

OOH Merlin controlling lighting is an AWESOME idea! Love it!

Dang flabbit, this is so good, the sentiments hurt. It's beautiful and I must thank you for writing it :)

That ending destroyed me

Astounding story. Very clever and insightful. A bit cynical and morose.

This is quite hilarious, actually.

lol. Love it.

Fabulous.
Now would I have the courage to either rat stew or snake soup? Lol.

I really like this one. I can visualise Merlin's innocent joy and wonder.

I have a suggestion. Your sentence:
"With exited wonder in his eyes, Merlin graced the lightning with his fingers, like brushing a little. "
can be edited as follows:
"With excited wonder in his eyes, Merlin caressed the living lightning with his fingers; delicately stroking it."

fabulous final sentence.

Interesting. Percival vs darkness. Who'd have thought it.?

Epic last line

So very heartbreaking too

What do you think about a series showing Merlin's skills with girls?
Example, how to cheer them up (Gwen? Or another servant girl), how to make them feel beautiful (Freya?), how to treat them like equals (Gwen?), how to fight with them in battle (Isolde) etc

Naturally the boundaries thing would impress Gwaine

Still that's part of why they became such good friends, Merlin not caring for titles and accepting Gwaine and Gwaine treating Merlin as a friend

Very well thought out :)

Merlin must fight after the battle ends, and fight for what matters most, life