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nice. so many ways the Scandal writers could have written a better script but didn't.

GOOD !

I'm glad fitz and Olivia finally together again after all he did go to war for her maybe now they can having the life they always want it with babies and jam they love each other and need each other fitz and Olivia belong together he need to divorce melie and married Olivia they love each other ...

After reading your story I realized this is something that SR and her Minions...I mean writers don't do: they don't have Fitz and Olivia talking to each other. Actually using their words and communicating with each other. Fitz's explanation to Olivia why her declared war for her was brilliant. With all those writers at SR's bidding not one of them could write a scene like this? Incredible!
FanFiction writers surprise me constantly at the level of creativity that is shared with the readers.
My one quibble: the romatic encounter escalated rather quickly and seemed tacked on and a bit contrived just to add some "spiciness" (?). Other than that it was a fine story. I hope you continue to share your talents with us the readers.

This was good. The best part of their story will be when they stand and fight for each other.

Love love love it! If only shonda could send the shoe in this direction it'll be greay

I thought this was a great start. It's like how I would have view his decision to go to war. Until you are in that situation you really don't know what you would do. Right now not being in his situation as POTUS I would have went to war myself.

This was a lovely story! I really loved how beautifully you portrayed their love. Thank you for writing it!

awwww i loved it! i hope it happens on the show that would be awesome ;-)

Niice. Thanks for sharing :)

I loved this! You wrote Fitz better than most and I could see this happening on the show. Hopefully it does in some shape or form ;)

AND DON'T YOU DARE RUN AGAIN LIV LOL! UP NEXT D-I-V-O-R-C-E.

I hope SR and her writers give Fitz that dang monologue bc he deserves to say his part as well. Liv may still not understand but I do believe that he does deserve a chance to have his say. Of course you can see I enjoyed Fitz's monologue and definitely the make up :-D Wonderful Read!

These two are going to end up in prison if they don't stop stalking about their crimes. Let that ish go
Wish it had been longer but with her talking about how she knew he would look for her and that she had to rescue herself

I just loved it wish there was more but what a great story great job hope you are having a great weekend so far tell next time