Wonderful story! I loved that chapter. It was really cool to read how Inoichi worked on the issues with Naruto and Haruo. Thank you for writing!

I couldn't stop reading. Its simply amazing how character is fleshed out, and the plot is so interesting.

Bonjour!

you know its too immature of them if only they give sasuke the mental or pyscology help it would help every one in long run i think every one from uchiya and hyuga clan should get mental doc for normality and include in society

its heavily on harry than the naruto both of them are my fav its not fair

beautiful

author-chan did u know that kopi in indonesian language means coffee?
it makes me laugh in this tense setting

Omfg. I'm having a really hard time here. It shouldn't be as bad as it seems to me right now, but it really bothers me when you write summonses. It's not even a bloody word bud. I'm going to find something else to read until I cab stop reacting so strongly to it though

Dude. You probably meant summons there. Not summonses

Do you mean OOC characters? Because OCC makes it seem like you're saying Originally Crappy Characters.
If that's what you mean though, good on you for trying to improve them. Lol

Briefing not debriefing. Debriefing comes after the mission

Please continue

This hasn't been updated in awhile, has it been abandoned?

I really hope you continue and finish this! Definitely faving. As to your note at the end about parallels between the unstableness of Harry/Haruo and Sirius focusing on one person I'd like to point out that Sirius focused on Severus for no other apparent reasons than the fact he "existed" and that James was jealous of Severus' friendship with Lily. Whereas in your story Harry only bothers with Sasuke in reactionary responses anytime Sasuke approaches him and his friend in a hostile manner and bullies them. Something that's only became frequent because they've been forced to spend a lot of time together as "teammates" and because Kakashi failed to nip Sasuke's arrogance and bullying at the bud as he'd intended. I also find it weird that one of Sasuke's punishments is a required mental health assessment/therapy for as long as necessary when that's something he should have been doing long before now. And given that he's the constant instigator, and picked fights with all 3 teammates, he should have at least 1-3 more punishments instead of the same amount as Naruto, in my opinion. But oh well, what's done is done. Hopefully Kakashi was giving Sakura some remedial training or something since she wasn't on any restrictions.

Glad the reunion went ok. But did Koneko really have to get all prideful over Harry/Haruo preferring his full name for which he was named after an alias, over his western nickname that his (dead) mother gave him?
And oh no! Only one other chapter left! Better save it for after work...