Jesus loves you and thinks your all amazing buddies and wants to and will come into your life and help you and solve any and all problems if you ask and repent out loud :)

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thank you buddy here enjoy please

YOu may want to edit the POV. There are times I read things and it is in Jaune's perspective, then other's it's in a third person perspective. It will make it a much more interesting read, unless I am not realizing that there is a third person that is part of the equation, in which case I am sorry for a bad critique.

Great gambling geese batman, the ability to space the lines left and made it harder to read

I love Neo so much!

Damn Jaune isn't even in your story... Instead some dude named Juane is taking his place instead.

I believe wine ages better, solely on the fact that more people like aged wine than aged cheese. Both are expensive, but wine wins

I cant answer the first two, but the answer to the thrid is largely dependent on the type of Wine or cheese in question.

aww that warms my heart my cold blackened shrunken heart

pLEASE MAKE DIS A SERIES! It would be awesome!

I will hunt you down and beat you with a foam pool noodle if you dont continue this. There is so much freaking potential for some good feels here.

cheese

O.O Ooooh shit. Love it though.

He dies last in a inferno of fire into a giant explosion and limbs go every where is my guess. and wine does my pap had on burried in his back yard for 34 years got to drink it was badass

SERIES! SERIES! SERIES!