You have no idea how much breath you stole from my chest and lungs while I read this. This was just spellbounding and so amazingly beautiful and accurate. I haven't played the game, but I've seen many walkthroughs of it. This was probably one of the best Journey fanfictions I've read in like ... ever. Well done! *clap clap clap*

I adore your writing style: poetic with a good flow. I couldn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes, so good job with that. What caught my attention the most was that you wrote this without even mentioning the player. Which, in my opinion, is a master-stroke, not to mention a very hard thing to do. Well done.

Nice! Describes the story exactly!