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My word that was HOT! I think I need a cold shower after that. LOL! Just kidding. Awesome lemon you wrote with the right touch of sweetness added too it. I wasn't expecting the proposal, but it was a pleasant surprise.
I've read hundreds of Twilight fanfiction fluff & drama stories, including the lemons wrote into the stories and there's only so many authors that take the time & not rush a lemon but explore &keep them coming back for more. As if once isn't enough & just 1 chapter of some authors lemons could easily make up 2 or 3 chapter of somebody else's lemons. I usually hate it when a lemon isn't written in a way that forces them to be over & finished in no time. I don't mind them letting their passion take over & not always be so slow soft, gentle & sweet love making. But in the fictional world of lemons, this Edward has no pause, like the vampire Edward, he has an unlimited amount of energy & mojo to make love hours, days, even weeks non stop. Until he has to stop just long enough to hunt. I've read some authors who play on it, & let me tell you not only is blazing HOT, SO HOT you will have go to bed with wet dreams & new found inspiration for your subconscious spank bank.
But it's also freaking hilarious at times. I mean seriously, this one story I read both Edward & Bella were vampires (no co** blocking hybrid child in the story to keep them apart so they can enjoy their honeymoon stage & bask in their love & passion for one another. And no crazy psychotic Alice being her annoying self & constantly pulling Bella away from Edward to go shopping.
No it was mainly just focused on Edward & Bella with some good both emotional & humorous moments between both Edward & Bella & at times them & their families.)..
*Anyways, so Edward has already changed Bella & he's showing her just how interesting her nights will be now that she no longer gets tired or has to sleep or stop, eat or drink something. They literally can make love for weeks non-stop until their thirst becomes too much and they need to hunt.
And that's where it gets funny sometimes. Because Edward has hired Emmett & Jasper to keep several cages in the back yard hidden within the trees of nothing but live animals they captured that will be his and Bella's prey. It's like a mini pet zoo! Filled with either wolves, mountain lions, wolves, a grizzly bear, deer or for a little snack, a bunny rabbit or a chipmunk all of them and more in different cages and ready for whenever Edward & Bella get thirsty so they never have to leave their bedroom to far a ways & hunt for hours at a time. This way it takes them very little time to hunt their already captured prey and Emmet & Jasper are assigned clean up duty afterwards. Good thing Edward is loaded and pays them well cause that job wouls suck.
Anyway, I like stories like that sometimes that focuses on a completely different Edward and Bella who are less inhibited. That are still the same characters we know, love & adore. Just a little more friskier and a little bit of Dom & Dominatrix in bed.
Don't get me wrong, I dont always like an arrogant, cocky and controlling A-hole Edward. But I do however like that Edward in lemons. Seriously it's Edward Cullen in a whole new light. No wonder I've been obsessed with his character for nearly 10 years now. Lol! But it's not only about the lemons for me. I'm a bit of a hopeless romantic. And too me, sex without love is empty too me & reading about it. To simply put it, "My body will not go where my heart does not follow." Not only that but I believe in the sanctity of marriage just like Edward does. And I love how he is untouched & pure & completely & only ever Bella's man. He's only loved, wanted, needed & desired ONLY ONE woman in all his 110 years of life. He even resisted Tanwhorya Denali the used up skanky succubus. I love all Tanya never even he a chance. And how Edward looks beyond inhuman beautiful and sees the true heart & soul of a person. And how he believes in only sex within a marriage. How he patiently has waited all that time. It makes Bella & Edward's first time even MORE special. And Im sure any girl who is inlove feels truly honored by their man who waited for THEM. And didn't just give it up in a bathroom restaurant or a backseat of a pick up truck or behind the bleachers. It makes a woman feel less inferior & insecure having to not have to put up with being compared to past conquests. Being somebody else's sloppy seconds. Being the side dish instead of the MAIN DISH, or the ONLY DISH. Being special.
There's something so sweet & beautiful about Edwards eternal love for Bella. He will literally love her forever. His love will never fade away. He will remain always faithfully hers, never looking upon another or falling inlove with someone else. Too bad human men can't be as trustworthy with a woman's heart. But their are a few good rare gentleman out in this world. My advice, don't settle for second best. Life is too short to be with someone who you don't love with your whole heart. It's not fair to you or him. Your just wasting each other's time. Just because you love someone, doesnt mean it's always enough. I'm 30 years old & I've had my share of heartache, sorrow & loss. I've been around, experienced some bad things in my life that not many people have too. But that's my personal story to tell. In short, I've been a victim in some of the worst ways a woman can be victimized by a man. But in a more common area, I to not only have had my heart shattered by the first man I ever loved when I was a teenager. 16 years later, I still love & care him & his well being. But I think we would have never made each other happy in the long run. So I'm happy for him that he found someone else to love & has a beautiful son to show for it. Did I feel this way when I was almost 20 years old and found out he had moved on and was fixing to marry another woman? Hell No! I had been inlove with him since I was 14 years old. That kind of love proved the test of time and it never faded away. I was heart broken! I even fantasized of going too him to see if he really loved her, like he said he had loved me not even a year before then, or was he just settling? Was she a rebound? Was it too late for us? Yes, I admit, I went all Julia Roberts from my Best Friends Wedding for a few days seriously panicking that the only man I ever loved was about to marry another woman. I was desperate to keep him. But I thankfully never listened to those selfish thoughts. In short, I did what it took Julia Roboerts 2 hours to do later in the movie that she should have done from the start. To just love him. And love him so much that his happiness meant so much more too me that my own happiness. That I wasn't willing to wreck his happiness for the sake of my own. That was a big step for me to take into adulthood. Learning to selfless when the time called for it. Letting go of the man I loved so he could be happy. I had to trust that he knew his own heart. That he wouldn't have proposed if he didn't truly love her. Maybe it was all for the best. And to be honest, it took me years before it stopped hurting so bad. He was a beautiful man inside and out, not one easy to get over. Seriously, he was like my Edward, My first love, and he me he loved me but that he didn't feel he deserve me. He thought I deserved to be loved Bette than he was capable of. Little did I know that he was right about that. Atleast he loved me enough to do what he thought was best for me. I in turn had to do the same for him. Now I love him from afar and wish him the best in life. But atleast my heart doesn't feel like it's been punched out of my chest anymore. I can love him and see him with someone else with it killing me like it used to. Thank God for answered prayers and his strength. For God has helped me to overcome that heartache and to find someone who loves me even better than my first love ever did. Who knows? God must of done me a favor. Because I deserved to be someone's one and only. I deserved to be with a man who was worthy of my love and who wouldn't take it for granted. I thought I lost my Romeo and who would have to settle for a "Paris" in the future. But as I got older I realized that all them bad relationships made me appreciate a good God fearing man when he finally came along. And it turned out, I had never lost my Romeo. I had lost my Paris. But right when I needed him the most, Romeo came to me, loved me, married me, has comforted me after my beloved mother & grandmother died. Now he is all the family I have. Besides God, this man owns my heart. He is my home. He is my Boaz to my Ruth. I say to you now, don't settle for Paris. Wait for your Boaz. He can love you even better than Romeo can. Nobody should have to settle for being the tablecloth. They should be the table. Not easily discarded. Not ever discarded. But forever taken care of, nurtured, cherished and loved. Don't waist your time on a player. Their are a lot of beautiful men out their who are ready & willing to love you, cherish you & please you for the Goddess you are. You may not be a Queen, but he will treat you like the Queen he believes you are too him. Settle for no less girls. Pray, and wait on God to deliver a man worthy enough for your heart. Protect it from this ungrateful & selfish womanizer. You deserve better than the 30 minutes of pleasure they may offer you when they use your body. Find someone to grow old with. Find someone who is MORE inlove with your mind and soul than your looks. For in time, you want always have your looks to fall back on, then what are you left with?
Find someone who when your 80 still sees the beautiful girl they fell inlove with 60 years ago. In time, your grandparents and mother will pass away & you will be alone and orphaned with just your husband like I am now. You want to be with someone who will love you till your dying day. You don't want to die alone. You want a family, you want to be surrounded by your children & grandchildren? Then stop wasting time on these men who use your bodies like vending machines. And stop selling yourself short & settling for second best. And stop making excuses to protect your heart from ever being broken again in the future. Stop running away from Love. Yes. There's a LEAP OF FAITH a risk involved, but I learned long ago to stop running away from Love, or then I would one day be like My mother and Gran who died alone without a good man beside them because they had been hurt and scorned by men even before I was born. I took a chance even though I was afraid of getting married, afraid of getting my heart broken, but I chose to trust in the man I had come to love and take a chance in him. And 12 years later, we are still married & inlove, & I'm so happy I took that chance when I did. He has been a rock for me in these last couple of years after my mother died who I was so close to. My mother & I were each others best friends & comrades. We had been though so much together. And supported one another always. I thank God for a good husband who not only felt & shared my loss, but loved me & supported me though it all. One of the sweetest things he told both my mother & grandmother before they both died, he told them that he knew that they were holding on for me. Refusing to let go. The women who raised me never wanted to leave me alone. My husband told both my Mother & my Gran that they need not stay here for me, it was clear that God was calling them home. He told them whenever they were ready, to go Home to God. He didn't want them to suffer being imprisoned in their bodies any longer than they had too. He wanted them to be happy and free. He was strong enough to tell them that it was "ok" for them to go be with God if that's what God wanted. If it was their time. To be at peace knowing that they aren't leaving me alone. That he was here to love me and take care of me and to take their place in caring for me for the rest of his life like they did. Girls, do I have a godsend husband or what! So my Best advice is to wait for someone who can love you best, better than any other man ever could. Someone who brings you closer to God, not further away from Him. Someone who makes you want to be a better person. To love and cherish you as my husband does me. Yeah, I t for-warned you in my earlier posts that I'm a hopeless romantic. :-)

That was so sweet and wonderful, I loved it. Fantastic one-shot. TMI time: I have signed every card to my husband for the last twenty-five years with part of what Edward said in his proposal . . . I've never seen those words strung together in a fic before . . . yours was the first. Imagine my surprise! 'I love you with all my heart, my mind, my body and my soul.', is how I sign each and every card or letter to him. It was fantastic to read that here. :)

omg i love it

Aww that was sweet and hot. Debbie

That was so good :-) thanks for sharing! Really hope to read you again bb xxx

Oh I so loved that.
Tugged at the heart strings but in a good way.

I hope you continue this :)

love it

Loved it! Thank you for sharing these with us.

What a sweet story. Thanks for sharing with us.

Cute story! I kinda want their background/future story now!

oh what a lovely suprise,loved it..please new story soon..we'v missed you.

Ahhh...what an awesome surprise. :) Thanks for sharing. xo

It's lovely to think of dreams coming true for them.

Hot and sweet! Loved it! More more more!