I've been looking gor a Divergent fanfic! Finnaly! All i've seen was pjo! do you have a hp fanfic?

Wow yayayayay plz write more

Um, they've known each other for a day. Literally all they know about each other is their names and occupation and what they look like. That's it. How can they already love each other? One of them could be a sociopath, for all they know. This is very unrealistic. Never loving again because of one girl he's talked to for five minutes and kissed once, for a camera? Yeah, right. You're writing is good, but this is just too unrealistic and cliché and stupid to like. Sort of like Twilight. (Scratch that, you write better than Stephanie Meyer.) So, you write well, but I'd suggest adding more maturity into your writing. In Divergent, Tris didn't even say "I love you" until the second book. I think you should rewrite this. Probably as a multi-chapter fanfiction OR a one-shot (maybe a bit longer, so like a drabble or something) with lots of time skips. By time skips, I mean you start off with this first meeting, then going to them somehow meeting again, and then leading up to a few more moments where they become friends, slowly start a relationship, and then fall in love. Make sure to make the time skips long, rather than days or weeks. I think this could improve this idea a lot. Sorry for the beginning of my review. It was very derogatory, wasn't it? :/ You have a good basic idea, you just have to carry it out better.
BYZIES THIS DIEHARD FOURTRIS LOVER IS OUT!

I love it! Please update soon!