Oh man, I can't tell which is worse, my cold or the fact that tears have clogged up the other nostril and my year ducts. Oh man, I thought he'd go on and on with each generation after Arthur, I never saw this coming. Poor Arty. Oh Gods, you are one Hell of a writer, you know that?

Its sooooo nice...

Omg. That's the best vampire!merlin I've ever read.

Excellent. Slightly gritty. Serious. Well done.

Beautiful. Merlin has true compassion and strength of character.

Fabulous.
Fantastic take-down and subsequent interrogation.

Excellent. Rich story. I love how it's unfolding.

Poor Merlin. His world has gone stark and raw. Well written.

Awesome.

Surely Arthur can donate a pint?

Arghhh! D*** you and your ridiculous ability to make me cry! And make me completely abandon my homework... I love the idea of vampire Merlin, I really do, and I've read a couple of them but nothing this awesome! Seriously it was so well-written and so well put together and so, so emotionally charged, and...d*** you... Still crying!

I usually avoid these kinds of stories...but I'm so glad I tried this. This was really good, I liked it! Loved that sweet ending.

This is a really original take on a Merlin fic. I love it so much! Your characters are so well done and now I'm so sad that this story is over. I'm definitely going to check out some of your other stuff; hopefully it's as heart wrenching as this one! Vampire Merlin having to watch the people he loves die is so freaking sad. Anyway, this was great and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Fantastic writing, however, Merlin is not in character as per the TV series.

Very good.

Arthur comes across as a more mature modern day tough cop. I like it.