I don't understand why this hasn't gotten any reviews, I'd say this was one of your best fics! This you said was written over two years? Lol that takes so much dedication, it made it turn out well though.

You described things so well, I could picture everything clearly as Gammon approached the theater and how he escaped the Master of the Graveyard! I felt so bad for him the entire time, I think I'd freak out and panic and probably end up eaten in his situation haha.. I also like the quote from Master of the Graveyard's song! I think it adds to the story well.

There was one part in the middle where it suddenly changes from third person to first person. The line “something about her looks familiar, but I cannot decide what.” could be changed if it's meant to be in third person, or if it's really his thoughts than maybe you could do something to signal that? It's really hard to tell and pulls the reader out of the story once they notice it. I notice that the same thing happened later with “I can't seem to catch my breath.”

A small thingI really thought funny and ironic was how you described Master of the Graveyard's death as her dress of being of a previous century when Gammon's outfit seems... everywhere pfft. It's not really anything special just a small thing I found amusing.

Thanks for writing this! I can't wait to see how the rest of his search goes. Ima keep going now~