You must LOVE crushing people's souls. I like you.
Thanks for writing!

Nooooooo! My rational mind already knew how it would end, but my heart is still broken! That said, I think this was your best chapter, hands down - the descriptions were spot on, I knew exactly where everyone was in space (heh heh), and Stanley and Stanford's emotions and interactions were perfect! It was such a triumphant moment when Stanford broke through, and Stanley finally saw his brother again... And then the world collapsed, haha. Thank you so much for this angst-ridden masterpiece - I'm going to go curl up in bed now and have a good cry. ; )

But bluffing is Stanford's profession! You're still being cocky here, Lee. Nice chapter, waiting for the next!

Ahhhhh! I know this isn't going to end well, but I can't look away (haha). Man, I really loved Bill in this chapter, in a love to hate him kind of way - this was the most intimidating scene for him so far, and he wasn't even using any of his powers! Maybe it's because he has so (seemingly) total control over Stan now, or maybe how on point he was with his threats/accusations to Lee... Still, Stanley got the last (badass) word in, so that left me feeling happy - happy enough for you to crush with the last chapter, I'm sure! Haha, okay this has been an especially long ramble for a review - I'm going to go twiddle my thumbs waiting for your last update now!

Wow, what a great story! Please continue!

Wow - the fight scene from the last chapter was great, and I'm getting super nervous about Stanley's plan in this chapter! This is not going to end well, is it? (Also, I liked the subtle use of Lee's unwillingness to destroy the journals to save his brother to show how far his obsession/paranoia has taken him!)

Oh my! This just keeps getting better and better! The suspense is killing me! You really have an amazing writing style! Stan feels are still raging here... Both for my lil ol Ford and Stanley.

Amazingly written! I can't get over with what's going on with Stanford (absolutely my favorite!)

Stanley ran over his brother. HE RAN OVER HIS BROTHER. Oh my gosh, I will never get over this chapter - I love the angst and I am actually totally terrified to see what Bill and/or Stanley is going to do. Just when you give us some hope that Stanford can get out of this (and wow Stan, your future fear of heights is not at all cray-cray!) Bill gets even more control...

Ugh, sorry for my ramblings - I'm just suddenly totally invested in your story here. I'm so excited for the next chapter!

This story has really piqued my interest! I love the angst with Stanford and how he feels pushed aside by his brother - I can't wait to see where you go with this!

I love your story! Stan has been my favorite character of the show! I love the idea of brotherly angst where he is put in the painful struggle to be Lee's protector. Keep writing, I shall wait with great anticipation!