Very interesting. Just a few spelling errors and incorrect words, other then that very well done.

God bless.

I love how you made Batman the mentor for not killing and Deathstroke the adult supervision for killing, like a shared custody agreement. It's hilarious.

This is amazing and so well crafted! Everything just fits together into the perfect plot, with all the right twists that leave me on the edge of my proverbial seat. I just love your characterization especially of Dick as a talon and the bonds you've formed and display between the characters (love the batbros/batfam in your story)!

Thank you for the super lovely piece of work!

This is a really interesting twist to the mythology :)

More, please! Keep this story alive!

fantastic!

i hope you keep going with this story, its my favorite talon dick story !

Hey! I was wondering if you are going to continue this story or not! It's amazing and I love it. I'm not trying to be pushy or force you to write something you have on hiatus, just genuinely wondering because it's amazing.
~ShadowBat48

Whoa! That is one fascinatingly twisted au verse :)

I'm totally hooked by the talons of that night bird :)

Reading on!

It's nice to see you back on this story. Definitely one of my favorites.

This is really great, there aren't enough Talon!Dick 'fics out there. I know you've already done a parallel universe thing with Nightwing and Hood, but what if you brought Talon!Dick and Slade to the canon Teen Titans cartoon (where Dick hates Slade) or somehow the canon Young Justice meets Talon!Dick? I dunno, I just really like things like that.

Either way, your story is so good, I really like the way you've made Dick and everyone else.

This is fantastic I love it! I'm excited to read more!

I love your talon!dick. This is such a great presentation of his character. I love the slade friendship and can't wait to read more! The bits where he talks about himself like I'm already dead and hi complete lack of self esteem in some moments hits hard.

I know you just did one where Slade was mind controlled, but what would happen if Dick went rouge again and his family had to figure out how to take him down without killing him?

I was so excited when I saw you undated this, and this chapter didn't disappoint! Loved the...all of it. Whoops. Anyway the Scottish spirit, in Morocco no less, is really cool and I'm not sure but just seems to fit in way to show how things/people can get so misplaced. Also really like the comradery between Slade and Dick.

Well done.

I love this!