I love this! way more than the way it actually went! beautifully written!

I think building off of this to make a full series would be awesome.
Thank you for sharing this story.

once again, I really enjoyed this! it was so odd to see such mature versions of Ren and Sho haha but I enjoyed the 'strange bedfellows' thing happening. I also love that Ren called kuu, who I think would've been a fantastic help at the time. I did leave wishing for that heel siblings continuation though hahaha, but that is because I am trash xD

Good job with the story. I thin it is very good but Sho and Ren speaking together like this is a bit lol ... I can see Ren trying to act courteous for Kyoko's sake but Sho is another story I can't see him thinking or acting in a good manner in front of Ren at all.

I just love it! I want to read more!

I greatly enjoyed this story. It would be nice if it could continue. It really made me feel better. Thank you!

Is it more I want more beautiful work

OMG! I ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY LOVE THIS! you made all the characters amazingly good as well as not ooc. you also made it so that this could've been in the actual manga instead of just a fanfic. BRAVO!

I absolutely love this, it's a wonderful short little fanfic, and it's got so many elements that i liked:
Ren and Sho cooperating
Ren and Shor ACTUALLY GETTING ALONG (they even laughed together)
Sho realising more about Kyoko and deciding to make amends
Kuu
Ren breaking from his perfect senpai image
Kuon calling home
Kyoko being surrounded by loving people!
Thank you so much, it was lovely.

This is a much better ending then the original one. I don't think there is a person out that didn't want kill her mother. I knew she was heartless but come on who does that to their child. Your ending differently took the edge off all the anger that was left on the original ending. Thank you so much.

"MY SNACK!" lol
okay...

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This fic is so Beautiful and i just want more!

Kyoko really need to call Kuu in canon!

and we can tell Shou grow and the atmosphere between them isn't hostile...

and Kuon calling his parents! Yaaay!

Kyoko has so much people adopting her... she's so loved!

This was a great way to continue the chapter and I hope Kyoko finds out about Ren soon!

I liked it very much. Thank you.

This helped me so much with waiting for the next chapter and AFLGLDMKDKEKEJEJ I love this so much 3 Must re read once more... It even has kuu like Yus finally someone brought him back. Love this fic so much oh My GAwd. KEEP WRITING PLEASE I NEED MORE. thank you for this amazing fic tho

wow that's great! although it is obvious you didn't see/ read the raws for the chapter after this where she gets rid of sho quickly, your chapter is amazing and I hope you continue it!