It makes sense that Death would be no more if all entities perished: without life, there is no Death because there is no one left to die.

What WOULD Draco Malfoy name his Wand?

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That last bit with Grunt was disturbing. I look forward to Harry-Shepard meeting Rex.

Honestly, all 3 pairing options are pretty good, I'd be ok with any of them

Absolutely loving what you’ve done with Harry and the cast of Mass Effect.

Can’t wait for the next update

I vote Tali... but I imagine the decision has already been made and I’m behind the times

Definitely loving the start of this... although it is sad to see Harry so cynical. On to the next chapter

Keep it coming plz it is good

You fell into the common issue a lot of people do where you put a being like an uber powerful HP into the story and then still tried to follow the mass effect plotline step by step. When you put someone who is that powerful into the story and then progress it based around him SERIOUSLY holding back in regards to his knowledge, his abilities, EVERYTHING, just to keep the plot following the original it gets to be extremely unsatisfying. Why would he waste his time following Cerberus' instructions when he could go to the citadel and use his knowledge and magic to prove what was happening? Aside from their reactions he has no real reason not to reveal himself, because of that, the driving factor behind the story is now SOLELY to keep the plot the same as the game. So why? If you had deviated a little bit from it you could have done SO MUCH more! Maybe he decides to overthrow the illusive man altogether and make Cerberus into a less xenophobic organization or something? But having your main protagonist spending at least a third of his combat trying to hold back for no reason... not that enjoyable to read about... He's Harry Potter for God's sake! Have him shake some sh!t up!

Death is just a name for the concept of "The End", just because Reapers conquer one measly galaxy, it wouldn't suddenly disappear.

Apparently I can't review twice on the same chapter, I couldn't remember when I commented on chapter 10, but whatever.

I love this story! I've been following it for a long time. It's really difficult getting stories like this that are actually good. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for more.

Harem type with Tali and Liara

I would go for option #2 or 3 but between them I go for option #3 because I love Tali and the Quarians (though not the fools among them who insist on a losing war with the Geth). And I hope Harry would be able to help the Quarians and Geth join together again because together the can once again be a great power in the Galaxy. But right now the Quarians are on the verge of extinction and they don't have anyone to count on but themselves.

Seems like this one's abandoned too. Shame, real shame. In case you're still reading this - it's an amazing story, and i really hope you'll find it in you to continue it one day. Great work so far.