Reviews for The Support of a life time
Joey chapter 2 . 8/24/2018
Nice story I like how at the end she laid a egg
Lunar-Starlight39 chapter 2 . 8/30/2016
lol weird but good
UltimateCCC chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Ha!
Pokemance chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
EliPro
Thank you, this was my first story not only on this site but public over all, my grammar still sucks but it's because of my lack of english nationality, i try my best don't get me wrong but there are some errors that pass my word check.

However, i may sometime re-edit the story and (maybe) change the story, this story is what brought me over the edge on pokephilia and it's nice that it gets praised, even a little bit, by people that like the story.

In the future i may do a diferent take or do one on Gorgeist, who knows but this story does deserve more love from me.
EliPro chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
hey guys take it easy personally sure there might be some stuff here and there but to be honest I like this guys style of writing and this story also I just wanta say thanks for the story and glad for the ending kinda want more but that's just cause I usually get too into stories I read and like lol. ;)

P.S. I've seen worse writing skills, much worse actually.
warfighterzack chapter 2 . 7/12/2015
dude you spell just like a retard you're grammar sucks learn how to spell right kid
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
like to see more.
GijinkaVerse Writer chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
There aren't supposed spaces before commas and periods. The punctuation and much of the grammar is a complete mess.

Conversations are not divided correctly. There's suppose to be a new paragraph for every speaker.

[i think you attacked her soo you could eat her ?]

At no point would any hunter of meat bring their pray to a veterinarian to try to save their pray's life. Theis is not something Nurse Joy would say.

[after seing our positions the girl tazered me until i fainted]

Tasers don't make people faint. It's also a human rights violation using a taser in a situation without any threat of violence, and she also physically endangered the pokémon as well. It's pretty much criminal behavior.