If you haven’t read this before, this review is spoilers!

Chapter 14 is when they proclaim their live for eachother I believe, that or chapter 15.
Chapter 20 is when the smut is.

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I am so I love with this story! I would be quite fond of any books ( if you did do any publishing) you would write- hetalia or not mind you- and most likely buy quite the large load of them... Depending on how many you wrote of course. Thank you for such a well written story, you inspired me to write my own.

LOVE IT!

This story is very interesting to me. It did feel like it dragged on quite a bit with details but other than that it's very heartwarming to read.
Thanks for writing this awesome fic!

This is a great story :)

Fuck me this was one of the cutest stories I've ever read and now I'm just so sad that I finished it so quickly god dammit ;-; Thank you for writing this story if you ever read this review.

This story will make you feel giddy. It's sickeningly fluffy and adorable to a fault. Bring tissues and chocolate at all times.

I'm crying this was amazing Alfred is such a dork I just... EMOTIONS!

I LOVED your story, it was well written and had good pacing and flowed smoothly to the end! Good job!

I'm only on chapter 16, but I swear. Thank you for the Gilbert scenes, cause he just... he ruffles them the wrong way, which technically makes them mushy, and friggen Gil man

He already knows how to text?! How long has Alfred been living in the pool?

Gilbert is such an ass. He is corrupting Alfred's innocent mind!

omfg that was to funny

Thank you so much for this story! Sad to see it end T-T

Absolutely beautiful story! Lovely storyline and well executed plot. It was definitely worth the time it takes to read it. I loved it, so cute and adorable. A must read if I ever read one.