| Reviews for Pentupfury's Stories |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/16 This doc is awesome wish it was finished ️ |
anonymouse47 chapter 1 . 11/10/2018 I just love this story. |
Man285 chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 So you aren't going to update? |
Ryojin chapter 1 . 4/27/2018 such a good story wish there was more |
Kuman chapter 1 . 4/3/2018 This is good. Shame that it was pulled down and there is no updates |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 This is awesome. Man need more. It's best story i have ever read. Will it be continue. |
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 I wasn't around for this 'purge', but I would hazard a guess it was a purge of shitty content. If that was indeed the case, then it was completely warranted. God like main characters that take away any and all suspense, cliched characters and groups(E.g 'Great Uchiha Sasuke' 'Civilian Council'), overuse of flashbacks(some of which were events that took place in the previous chapter), absolutely zero character development, sex scenes that take close to half of a chapter(average chapter length is 10k words), and all around terrible dialogue. This is nothing but porn with very poorly written plot. The only good thing that I can take away from this, is that I never have to worry about reading another story from Pentupfury. |
singpu chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 damn..wish the author continued |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 1/19/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 11/11/2016 this is a very cool fic! Thank you for uploading this :) would you mind telling me if the author is still around? |
yuriko777 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016 its so fu4$ing long for one chapter |
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 ftyufgytffhjgsksgfghdsghdghsdgjsgdrhyudshagadsjkhsdh |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 good |
Rebmul chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 kinda hope there is more to this |
bigfan22 chapter 1 . 8/6/2015 Well damn...this was an awesome story. It's a shame the stupid purge took the fic off the site. Hopefully the original author will one day decide to continue it, or even give it up for adoption. I loved the BAMF Naruto and even Naruko is a powerhouse. Now that Kushina is back, I wonder if the relationship would have grown to include her. Oh well. Despite the possibility of this story never being continued, it was still a heck of read and worth the time I spent on it. |