oh my god! this is soooooo cuteeeeeee

Awwww. This is really sweet. I love how you wrote Tashigi and Smoker along with the consequences of having an unbuttoned shirt in a freezing environment. ;D LOL, Smoker's not fooling anyone, but then, it's easy to picture him doing exactly this. Good luck on your writing!

I just watched the scene were Tashigi runs to Smoker after Law takes his heart... and immediately wondered why I hadn't shipped them to begin with! Now I'm just a bit bummed out there aren't as many people who think so too (based on the limited fanfics), but in so glad you wrote this! It's hard to write a ship with Smoker, considering he's so stoic, but you I think you did a good job!

Hello, author! Can I translate your fanfic on Russian language?

lol cute! :)

AWWWWWWWWWW

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Hey, hey, hey... I KNOW this title ! :p you should have say it.
But it's a great story, not OOC to me.

"...i am the sand in the bottom half of the hourglass... I try to picture me without you but i cant..."

Ps : if you want to pm me, my account is Saturne-OTMW

so heartwarming

Wasn't too OOC at all. Great story.