| Reviews for The Battlefield |
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Sanitylegend chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 aaand three minutes later,he dies. okay eehhh welp |
Sanitylegend chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 is it bad that I'm at 1/4 and already want Daniel to die even though he's so sweet. kinda has to do with another fic of bnha and an idiot who thought he could take Izuku's place... he seems likeable though lol |
Elji chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 Good Soldier John. Sounds like it should be classic reading in High School. It's fantastic how you show how John came to be who he is when he meets Sherlock. This story makes sense, it feels real. I like the tone of your writing in this, I don't know what it was, but it felt very honest, slowly drawing you in to feel compassion and understanding. Your writing is incredible. I hope you'll write some more! |
SherlockiansGetBored chapter 1 . 12/27/2016 This gives me shivers every time. Beautiful. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 This is so sad, beautiful and perfect in every way. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 I love that Sussex is John's hometown because of where Sherlock retires. |
MindBlownAgain chapter 1 . 7/7/2016 With your talent of writing, I was so happy to see that you had written an army!John fic. I now ship John and Daniel (no matter the outcome of the story). When John was first handed his gun near the beginning of the story, I immediately thought of the quote used so often in your stories, including this one: "His Sig Sauer handgun sits at the bottom of his desk drawer like a secret. He contemplates it daily." I not only love this quote, but also think it holds so much meaning in this story because the reader is given a deeper understanding of John's life. I also liked how you varied the dialogue from the show. It makes the story more fresh and original. (I had to write all of what you have just read down to remember to include it in my review, but then I continued to read and...) Oh my gosh! That ending! You did the full circle of "A Good Man..." perfectly! I had forgotten about that opening until reading the end. It was beautifully planned and so beautifully written. That very last line of "Sherlock Holmes tattooed across his heart," brings the whole story together as a perfect ending. It is the perfect way to show that Sherlock is the one thing John lives for. |
azkabcn chapter 1 . 9/21/2015 Aww! I'm glad it worked out for Johnny in the end. I really am. I love the emotions flowing through this piece. It's really a beautiful thing. I really don't know how I survived the death of Daniel. I was getting quite attached to him. This was great! |
christineisthename chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Incredible! I really like how you captured his pain of being in the battlefield, and how that transition in emotions took place over time. I also like the ending's tie-back to the beginning quite a bit :) You paint really wonderful pictures (I could see each image vividly in my head) and I love your writing, as I have each time I've read your works within these past 24 hours ;) :) |
Jazmine Garcia chapter 1 . 4/19/2015 Wow. That was a rollercoster of emotions. Other fanfics have portrayed John as an optimist,happy even after the war; and this was like a whiff of fresh air. I really enjoyed reading a new side of John Watson. Verry well written, even though it's only a page it feels like chapters. |
cluingforlooks chapter 1 . 4/4/2015 YOU'RE MAKING ME FEEL THINGS. This was beautiful. |
suchana.ghosh.58 chapter 1 . 4/1/2015 Woww! This story is really good! Even after reading plethora of fanfictions of same genre,it still feels refreshing. The format is good. Some moments are really touching. My heart dropped at Daniel Peterson's death. All the angst of wartime and John's psycology was well written. Loved the 'Arm straight,slow exhale,narrowed eyes and there it is,seamless fire ','kiss me sherlock says and john does','nothing,i love it' lines. The 'Good man' ending was story never feels too much or too less,its perfect! Every Sunday i eagerly wait for Love Ballads update,and these stories occasioanally,just make my day. Thank you for such memorable fics. :) |
ReAdErSfEvEr chapter 1 . 3/25/2015 I really like how you made the parallel between john joining the military and john spending his the rest of his life with Sherlock. |
JRLink chapter 1 . 3/25/2015 This was beautifully written, I like how you make your own storyline mix with the series. I liked this and how we get to see everything from John's eyes. I hope you write more, it would be fun to read something similiar from Sherlock's point of view. Thank you for this story, hopefully see you more stories |