This is pretty cool
Your two si are interesting
Would love to see where this is going

Awesome fic! Please update soon!

I love this story!

Great chapter

I really like Yue. Is Luffy a third? or did you just make her female?

looks good

I look forward to more :)

I hope you do this story has a lot of potential if you continue this story I'm always looking for a good read, I think I am pretty good at find something with good potential if I read it enough. Well see ya

This fic is great so far. I look forward to seeing what you do with this story in the future. Please update again soon.

I love the story but i don't quite understand all of it... I mean what did her rival mean by her being special? And what is that feeling she has? Anyways i find the story Amazing... Can't wait for more!

Amusing story so far.

...you know... its been over 2-3 weeks... you should totally update soon. It was great by the way, I like how that Mihawk had so much ambition and then his daughter is like '...you want me to do what now?' I just find it funny that his daughter could care less where life leads her. At first when you brought up Azura I thought this was going to be a re-make of Mihawk's and Shanks' rivalry as females. I also thought for a moment right before you described Luffy's hair as black that she was meeting Shanks. Great story so far - does Zoro think he's the first mate now then? How will they react when seeing her golden eyes? Or will they even see it for a long time? (I personally think that they should find out in a fight when her hood gets torn away/knocked off) Please update when you can, would be greatly appreciated.

This is really good! I hope you will updated soon.

haha i love this story! sorry, i don't really have any constructive criticism to give at the moment. maybe another time! But great job so far! :)

I really, REALLY want to see Zoro's reaction when he see's her and her eyes... ehehehehehehee