She should not have slapped him. He really didn't deserve that.

This was cute. I’m not sure how I would have reacted in the same situation.

This was beyond beautiful!

Cute

it wasnt bad per se

Okay

great one shot

Wow! This was really great. I love how you portrayed harry. Your an awesome author.

This was very well-written & cute.

Great story! Even if you did steal that one line from how to train your dragon. Keep writing

I love this story! Too bad it's a one-shot, but it's a good one-shot!

Gosh this is SO going to my favorites! It's well written and is such a beautiful masterpiece :)

I did indeed smile. As i am a rather evil guy, I'll start with the bad. Mostly because it's less actually. It's short, it ignores way too much of the rest of school, like detentions and such. There's no way anyone can get away that easily with skipping classes in a boarding school of any kind. Well, that was the bad side. I also don't believe she wouldn't piece things together immediately at the sight of those green eyes. On the plus side, these things don't mean a thing in a story like this. It's a nice, fluffy little feelgood-story drawn in bright colours, a snapshot of a few rather important days in all their triviality. The thought of full disclosure this way was interesting.
I didn't find it very believable, but i found it highly appealing. It's a nice little tale, not literature, and as a nice little tale it was one of the better ones i've read..

very impressive and emotional

fantastic! U should make another one like this but with more chapters! I couldnt put it down. I continued to read and reread it! FANTASTIC!