Reviews for Genesis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sarada, thinking Mama had died. Hope Papa keeps his promise now. :) |
![]() ![]() Honestly I don't even know what to say anymore, You are definitely one of the very few writers who write Sakura the way I would like to, Mature and Not clingy or obsessed or fangirly and this just seems more real to me. maybe it's because we are both from the Oriental side of d world :p but whatever The reason, I do connect with your stories and I hope you continue to write like you do :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i miss reading your stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwww |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good and cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() The end felt a little too sudden. Though, I think you want to leave the readers how they want the story to end. I like the fact that its realistic and raw; there's the right combination of fluff and comfort. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() Awwww sooo sweet... such good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adored Ino in this fic, and I know for sure Sakura would do just the same for her! Seeing Sakura and Sarada's interactions also warmed my heart. |
![]() ![]() After I read this short story, one thing amazed me the most is Ino. She's being a good friend as she always does. Stupid Sasuke. He doesn't know what he's missing in his new life. But I still love him due to his presence when Sakura is sick. Aww..! And Sarada is a tough girl, just like her mama. I love this family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "okaeri anata" a pause "tadaima tsuma" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried. Enough said |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe, that was sweet and nice. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your Ino is such a glorious goddess of vengeance and love! She was my favorite part of this whole fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need more of those sasusakusara ffs! |