Reviews for SmallvilleX Evolution: Death, Rebirth and Something In-between
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 1/24
Scarlet Witch is interesting.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2017
Clark wouldn't understand plus id was that cause house of m
CalebElBardo chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
Let cool presentation of the Watcher !. It has been an interesting story and quite intense, despite being short. Again you show your talent as a writer.
Nathan chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
I hope that you get around to writing a whole story about Clark and wanda's relationship I would really enjoy reading that but I enjoy all your writing involving superman ( he's my favourite comic book character)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
What we need now is Anti-Monitor with his power he can destroy realities as many times he want and no villian or superhero of marvelverse can stand against him except maybe mr fantastic he can built anything
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
poor wanda trying to change the reality, only Anti-Monitor has that power universally
Micheal the Archangel chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
You know something? This was a rather incredible story ben, and it sets up for something later in the universe.

You know, as I was reading this I think to myself that this could be the makings of a great story. One set several years ahead in the future of Clark's life. Imagine the story starts off as Clark well into his career as superman, he has the JLA, he's allied with many of the greatest heroes on earth, and he has an incredible family made up of all different friends and heroes. Not to mention his awesome job at the bugle with peter.

He's spending his time divided among his responsibility as leader of the JLA, his job, and trying to have a life, spending time with Wanda, who has been having issues with her magic and so has been forced to live in a home on the ruins if genosha, Clark having built the place himself. When news of doomsday breaks through, I'd Invision Clark visiting Wanda when he hears of the attack, though Wanda pleads and begs him not to leave her, he kisses her forehead and promises her he will be OK, and will see her again, only for Wanda to experience a vision of his impending death as soon as he leaves.

He comes to fight, he sees doomsday, and he lays it down on him...unfortunately victory costs him a price too high, and Clark so dies. In the aftermath so many friends and allies are distraught, there could be a falling out between the x-men, JLA, and avengers, Ollie being drunk and angry accusing them all of being cowards like him and not helping Clark like they all knew they should, and as a result, the once harmonious relationship of all three teams, brought together by Clark, ends just like that.

And of course there's Wanda. She is broken, her mind, emotionally destroyed at the loss of Clark. I'd imagine constantly she is using her magic to create illusions of her and Clark, just the two of them all alone, but the the prof and strange have to break the illusions and make her see reality. Her mental state gives them pause and has them consulting the others as to what they should do with Wanda.

Now here is where part 2 of the story kicks in. After the civil war, Wanda cannot stand all this chaos, wishing Clark would make all this go away, knowing if he were here he'd be able to save the day, but he's not. Wanda realizes she has to do something, to save the day and be the hero Clark knew she was, and so Wanda decides to save everyone, just like Clark would, a d I comes her magic and creates the House of EL world. Can you imagine how she'd react to awakening in her bed to find not only Clark laying beside her, but in between them two beautiful boys laying between mommy and daddy. Shed be overcome with emotion.

And then layla and wolverine have to muck it up for everybody don't they?

Well basically a story spending over the death of superman and house if m is what I'd imagine it being like, and honestly I think it'd be awesome.

Anyways looming forward to more great world Ben. Keep up the good worm and update soon.
SixOneSix chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
oh i would love to read more on this!... please please please tell me there will be more...
Philip chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
What if you somehow have Odin bring Clark back? Does he have that kind of power? Or maybe Clark is taken to Asgard after his battle with Doomsday and healed?
masoliki chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
hey when you come back to this i was wondering if you make a reference to X-men battle of the atom because it would make a totally great storyline and gives a concept that shows that their are good futures instead of apocalyptic ones for your Smallville X series and how it will fit many of its characters in it too.
artimuos chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
dude you know that kryptonians does not dies on planets with yellow suns except when they were beheaded only there bodies slows the process to heal and recover read the doomsday comics and even superboy came back to life after his thrashing by prime and how much time superman take to return from death maybe two months and it is very short time to destroy the world with sentinels and mutant wars even in comics universe please read the superman mythos again or even the smallville series and comics again, i first like the story because it is going different than the canon storyline but it seems you are not using any of your creativities anymore to write a different story just mixing both canons together learn from doomed storyline how dc are making new stories even through old characters and foes
Drake G. Reaper chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
Awesome preview of what's to come in this series. Although one thing I would like to see once you reach the Infinity war storyline have Thanos almost kill Superman which lets him see Death again. In doing so Death gets extremely pissed at Thanos and since he has the Infinity gauntlet and all the stones she decides to step in. I just think it would be awesome if the Death of this storyline would just completely lay a smackdown on Thanos.
Flounder En Flucter chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
Ben, I kind of hate you for the teaser, it's so good it makes me want it now. Enjoy your break
Horus Ra chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Angela... That Angela The huntress, the one of the most fearsome of the celestial Hordes, The Hell Spawn huntress That Angela.
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