Cool story, too bad it stopped updating.

Hey there! Hope you're doing well. This is my first time reviewing this story though I've been following it for quite a while now (since chapter 8 I think). Anyway, I'm not here to ask for an update as you've no doubt been getting bombarded with requests for those. Instead, I'm here to wish you luck in whatever you are doing now. Whether that be college, a writing rut, or just life itself being difficult. Here's to hoping you find your light in the shadows, and I wish you the very best! Have a wonderful one!
~SL99

update please

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Damn... That’s dark.

I love it.

Could one of those restrained Lati... be Ash's mother?

That was beautiful and well typed. Everyone has their breaking point and its important to have someone that truly has your back when you hit it.

OMG, I just realized. If your going with the mating process most of the Pokémon stories I've read, and Ash's decide didn't change what he is, Ash has a child in Altomare. I hope you have him go back and visit.

DAMN... Great chapter. I'm wondering how long it will be till he learns the truth.

I like it, Ash learning to control his new form and a glimpse of Pikachu's backstory.

I think this was a very strong opening, i look forward to to continueing.

Hey man! Just re-read this fic, and boy did time fly! So, I'm just hoping you only have some creativity-related issues, and everything's going well for you. Hope to see some of your quality writing soon-ish, and take care!

I remember stumbling across this story almost three years ago. I was a silent reader, checking in occasionally to see the progress of this story. While I've been keeping up hope for awhile now that you might come back to this, I have a feeling you are done.

Honestly, this was one of my favorite stories on the sight. So unique with a drastically different feel to a lot of the other works you'll find here. I have a feeling you got yourself stuck in a side story you had no motivation to write.

If you ever want to come back to this, just give us a recap on what might happen during the in-between. It doesn't have to be long. Just the basics of what occurred, until you find something you want to write. Because any amount of this story is better than none.

At the very least, if this is officially canceled, can you please tell us so. I'm sure another writer would love to pick up where you left off (I might be willing to do it myself).

If you ever see this review, thank you for this fun read.

Maybe one day, if I don't give up, if I keep checking and hoping, maybe Vodhr will come back...

Update?