| Reviews for Varia's Girl :ADOPTED VERSION: |
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  Guest chapter 18 . 3/11 Please update soon |
 tasyadewi16 chapter 18 . 2/23 i miss u author-chan... update please ~ |
| Lunary chapter 1 . 8/16/2017 Uhm not bad but if possible start looking for beta and rewrite the whole story. I've only read the first chapter and part of the second chapter but the grammar isn't good and this story has a lot of potential if it was better written. This is not meant to be a hate or flame review it's meant to help you to get better. Regards Lunary |
| Royalty Scans chapter 16 . 4/16/2017 Naw that reason is totally ACCEPTABLE no sarcasm intended |
| Royalty Scans chapter 6 . 4/16/2017 Aww no part 2 of tha date? |
| BlueNight19 chapter 16 . 4/15/2017 WAAAAHHH! I wanna read more huhu |
| Royalty Scans chapter 8 . 4/15/2017 Mongrels? isnt it supposed to be worms , lizards and reptiles |
| Royalty Scans chapter 5 . 4/14/2017 Pfft ohmg the RED MOON:road to womanhood is AWESOME |
| Royalty Scans chapter 3 . 4/14/2017 wannabees? OMG so cool and cute its colute? |
| Royalty Scans chapter 3 . 4/14/2017 WTF ANGEL! HIBARI THINKS TSUNA IS AN ANGEL AFTER STABBING A MAN?! |
| Crazzy Lucky Rin chapter 15 . 3/12/2017 you say twin but have write they a years aparti not agaist romance, but it should be 2nd after story should be. here tsuna become an spy but she fall so fast for hibari. i hope she will, fall in love after ring arc and getting dificult time to forgive her brother and dad. so hibari offer her an spar till they cant move anymore to help tsuna soothe her heart. about hibari? righ on story is okay, no much different. |
| Undertheskys chapter 16 . 3/11/2017 Story is good. |
| Undertheskys chapter 6 . 3/11/2017 I've noticed that theres a lot of flash backs in this story... |
| Undertheskys chapter 5 . 3/11/2017 Cute, playing house |
| MikazukiSuzuki chapter 15 . 3/3/2017 I can not wait to read more ! |
