I Always felt like Sakamoto was the third wheel since he didn't grow up with his peers, didn't study at Shoka Sonjuku, didn't even know that much about Shoyou . That's Amazing that Gintoki can talk about his relationship with Tsukuyo to Sakamoto . His switching between his stupid side and a serious behaviour and that's hilarious ( in an accurate Gintama style , Sorachi would be proud haha)

Yeah I remembered Batou and Shoukaku ! That's really interesting that you included characters from the lasts arcs to this timeline . Baby Kamui is here too ! I love him (I love all the Yatos really).
I really appreciate that Sakamoto is getting so much spotlight in this story . He's the only one Gintoki can confide in, as Katsura and Takasugi are too engrossed in their battle

ahhh I thought I was able to post my review for chapter 11, since it's the part that I love! grrr
Anyway, OOC? They're not OOC at all. It's their teenage counterparts so Tsukki is not 100% tsundere and Gin-san is passionate. They haven't lose their senseis yet, so I think it's to be expected.

And for the latest update, I love the convo between sakamoto and gin-san! Too bad Sorachi sensei didn't let Tsukuyo met Gintoki in the past, they have a lot of connections. And on how you build up the story is amazing, I do not mind reading chapters of it, it's like I'm reading those serious arcs in Gintamanga. Thanks for the update Alicia-san!

Thank you!

If my mother found out I was doing this at 12 midnight she'll scold me for sure... but I can't help it .. I really love your story! and this is like one of the only things I look forward to on FFN! oh man now I can't wait for saturday(well sunday here) to come!
Thanks for this chapter!

Haha you honored your promise , stop spoiling us ! That was hot, ~~Gin went to town~~ ! I love when Gintoki takes his time teasing and pleasuring our sweet Tsukuyo . These are my favorite smut !
And of course Gintoki's cool he's the epitome of coolness ! I don't find it OC at all even more because he's younger, hot-blooded and reckless, his life is constantly on the line .
As for Tsukuyo it also makes sense that she's less of a tsundere, you made her retrieve her feminity, and she's even coming to terms with her feelings . Of course she'll need a lot of exploration ( and Gintoki's here to give her a hand, and his tongue and his... Well you know what I mean XD) so she'll get embarassed but that what makes her our precious Tsukky !
I love when they're pairing in fights, fiercely battling besides one another, it makes them even more compatible and hotter .
Thanks for this chapter .

Looking forward to the smut oneshot of our beloved GINTSU.

One hell of a date

one word author-san... H O T

Lol so many guests looking forward for puff puff action , well can’t blame them. Looking forward for their reunion.

One of the best arc in Gintama, i like your take on it ans that you included Lady Kamekichi. I love traditional/typical japanese outfits and I'm so happy that you made Tsukuyo wears it ! Can't wait for Gintoki to appear !

Yeah incoming puff-puff action. I am such a degenerate. Hahahaha.

I agree with the anon. I hope we'll see lots of hot steamy puff-puff actions in the remaining 15 chaps or so. Keep up the good work author-san. :)

Loved the chapter, thank you!

man, what a cliffhanger.