Awesome

Cool

Wow. I'm really liking the exploration of different Houses thus far! Definitely anxious now, though, about the bit if Slytherinness Ron exhibited just now *ack*

Petunia nice Dudley got sex change harry huffy and now goalkeeper. Why not make harry Harriet? Ron Ronnie Hermione Herman? Snape ms Snape deaco

Great story, but it SERIOUSLY needs a prequel. I still don't understand why the durselys had a girl and how or why that made them so much nicer. Vernon got slim and is nervous about gaining weight? How'd that happen? Need explainations!

Wwell then.
'twwould seem that all the necessary peices of the puzzle wwere awway, out there all alon? Right at the first chapter?
Wwell I ain't rereadin the wwhole thin.

I guess I'll shrimply read on and then wwe'll sea.

A single point of divvergence, huh?
Wwell, the obvvious choice wwould be Daisy Dursley.

But that isn't it, is it?
I so do lovve a challenge.
Excellent start, by the wway.

Also, Dumbledore's last line here givves me serious vvibes from *checks* somethin that didn exist yet wwhen this wwas published. Oh wwell.

I've figured out the single point of divergence. It is when Hagrid dropped Harry over Bristol. when he picked up Harry he somehow got the one from the canon universe instead of his alternate one. Never mind the changes to the Dursleys you have even changed the silver doors at Gringots to crystal and changed how the vaults open.

Neat trick making an alternate universe story out of a divergence story as they stay in the same universe.

it is good but really long I wasn't expecting much

it was kind of boring but it wasnt bad I liked it keep writing

awesome chapter

Well, I suppose this answers the question, "Were you ever dropped on your head as a baby?" Though I would think more "intercranial trauma and death" rather than a simple personality rebalance.

cool chapter9

awesome still

I love your story it is amazing as I said before never ever stop writing you are a great writer