| Reviews for Every Rose has its Thorn |
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G97BG chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Veri n1c36UQst0ricI |
Humfrery chapter 2 . 8/27/2016 Crap, reverse showing and telling in my review below |
Humfrery chapter 1 . 8/27/2016 You know, I always thought that Natalia was a little bit of a Tsundere. If extremely hard on the "Tsun" part. This story was a lot of fun. Congratulations on making your fight scenes not boring. That is extremely rare when it comes to fanfiction. The romance was really sweet and the dialogue kept everyone in character. I didn't like how the penultimate chapter started to lean more towards showing rather than telling, though. |
Kidd chapter 6 . 8/14/2015 Thanks for writing a fanfic of Freedom Fighters! This story was short and sweet. I loved it very much, I recently got the game and ended up getting addicted to it real quick. Anyway, keep writing and keep doing what your doing! Thanks again! |
Fro Ninja chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 Nice fanfic! I can't believe I found Freedom Wars fanfic. I love that game. And I love how consistent and enjoyable the dialogue is. Will most def' check more of this out in the future. |
KnightSpark chapter 2 . 3/19/2015 Did... Did this dude just compare a woman's heart to an Abductor pod? |