Reviews for It Comes Down To One
Teyerin chapter 1 . 9/23/2019
Excellent way of capturing Erskine - thank you!
Ryn chapter 1 . 10/26/2018
Well done
proverbs31teen chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
3 Oh, Erskine. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIE?
Whitelion69 chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
This is a very good one-shot.
JuliaAurelia chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
This was really good! I love Dr Erskine too-we definitely did not see enough of him.
Tonitrua Corde chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
" "Do it." the silent reply said, steely. " Love Cap! This was a nice little story, and appreciated what you set out to do. A couple little things that might make it better would be some more details. Clay and Marley for example. I may have just been reading it wrong, but I didn't really understand why the stated reasons would have been enough for expulsion. Just my opinion. I think the line "When they were down to nine, he'd already discounted Hodge, but he did not have a good reason to send Hodge off, until the experiment was done." would fit and flow better under Hodge's section. And lastly, this could certainly be me making things up, but didn't Erskine refer to Hodge as a bully? He certainly seemed to easily feel like one to me. I always felt it was how they would use their powers that made the difference in the men, with Steve being far superior. But again, that could easily be just me. If your interpretation was different, then this is quite fine. :) I liked Abraham's thoughts, recognizing and respecting the spirit of his favorite. Good stuff. Collough seemed pretty cool, and really liked all the implications with Bensley! Keep up the good work!