Reviews for Maria's Grave
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Your story had left a deep impact on me. The message of this story had truly made me ponder about these days...yes, people growing up and following what they are expecting to do in their own lives, it is what it is for a human being. Yet, there are many of us, enjoying the freedom and the moment we have right now compared to others, it feels as though we are left to wonder and think about life, by ourselves... I appreciate your great work, and I definitely loved the way you had handled the character's feeling and thoughts. (Long review, geesh.)
I hope good things happen for you- until then, guest
Lordoftheghostking28 chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
That was great! Lots of emotion...and I connect with ya on the fandom level. I feel so sorry for Shadow, though. Immortality really is more of a curse than a gift.
metal virus chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
I feel you man.
The old days are over and slow but surely all of us will go.
All my pull factors to the fandom are gone and the games just don't feel the same anymore , they bring a total new audience
I love your depiction of shadow at least some still remember his original attitude instead of the useless prick boom shadow is. Oh well i digres the days of adventure and fun are gone. A ghost in the fog maybe the current younglings will feel the same later
18204 chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
This is beautifully written. I can't help but say that I feel the same way that you do sometimes. I first got into the Sonic fandom at fourteen, and here I am at twenty, lonely and pathetic (lol). Just like Shadow, I continue to cling to that dead dream.
Great job :)
J.C.S.B chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
Wow. You've definitely hit some truth there with the idea that the Sonic fandom has moved on. I mean I still love the series and I always will, but it feels like the new games have lost their soul a bit. I mean, the character of Shadow in Sonic Boom holds no resemblance to the Shadow created in Sonic Adventure 2. I think the Sonic Team has forgotten us fans and moved on to the little kids who don't know about the characters and who they really are.
Anyway, rant over. This was a brilliant thing to read, a perfect summation of Shadow's inner struggle. You've definitely nailed it.
J.C.S.B, out
BiteWorseThanBark chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
Neat lil' flesh-out of Shadow, Dark! It's nice to see him laid a bit more bare and (somewhat) vulnerable. His lack of tear ducts is also a nice kick to the heartstrings.

Dammit, bruh, the A/N is making me feel guilty. *shakes fist* Like, I can understand your thought process, but! The awesome thing about fandoms is that while it's sad that old fav contributers are moving on/over/out, NEW people are streaming in all the time! Hell, YOU probably touched some of those new arrivals with your writing (Pervert. Go to jail. *slapped*).

Idk if I'm getting my point across properly because I'm not half as eloquent with my words as you are (nerd), but you - and Shads - shouldn't lament over the past so much because the future has SO many possible opportunities for awesome stuff to happen! Sure, Shads will never be able to hang with Maria again, and some of those authors you admired may never rejoin the StH fandom (*sweats and shuffles away*)... But Shads can create NEW happy memories with Sonic and co., and you're gonna find some fresh talent/people to admire in this massive fandom. So chin up, you little emos. Grass is greener and all that other uplifting b/s. :p