hmmm, interesting one of those I wish more chapters have been posted. cant wait for the next installment of your story.

nice chapter. nice way to introduce yakumo. also are you going to have naruto revive minoto as well and that is why he is going to the temple, to get the shinigami mask. and what bloodline are you planning on giving the uzumaki clan, though can can you do some type reveal, even if it is a lie, that the uzumaki bloodline is really a hidden jutsu, one thing in bloodline fanfictions and in canon that i don't get is that so many bloodline users so openly admit to having a bloodline. wouldn't that paint a neon orange sign that says "RAPE ME SO YOU CAN STEAL WHAT MAKES ME POWERFULL." the ones that are already established to a clan that is one thing but then comes the rarer ones that just seem to pop up randomly or have very few users wouldn't it be better for them to hide it for a bit to prevent rape attempts, especially for the females?

A well done chapter. Good expalnation about what it is that Naruto will be needing to do in the next couple of days with his training. Liked how you were able to switch point of views in order to understand what is being said and done around Konoha's councils. Hiruzen will be taking no prisoners with the Council now and that is rather exciting. The same could be said about Hiashi and his elders. The meeting of the three children was well done and looks like there is some sort of contract between them that only he adults would know. Kushina is somewhat back at the moment and explains the details about Naruto to the others. Their reactions will be funny. Danzo is plotting as usual but this will be an extreme risk he will be taking. Can't wait to see the consequences. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

interesting. hopefully Danzo won't get away with his actions this time.

Ehr... fray? You should put dashes between the names and the additional suffixes. Like "Naruto-kun" rather than "Naruto kun." Otherwise... well, it seems weird.

nice start with this now how will you bring yakumo into this i wonder update soon

I love it this is great and will Naruto gain a weapon that represents his own power like Sesshomaru did with Bakusaiga my friend?

A interesting story. Started off really well with how you wanted the story to go and the beginning with Naruto being kicked out as well as exploring the town and understanding that he is hated was well done. Liked how he didn't know why and hat he seemed to just accept it. It is good to know who his allies in the village are as the ANBU and Hokage are looking for him. The Kumo Kidnapping was a good start for Naruto and Hinata to meet and found it amusing that Hinata fainted in the end. The conversation in the mindscape was well done as it explained to Naruto what his powers are as well as who he really is in regards to Kurama being in there and the reason why. Can't wait to see more of his manifestation powers and how he will use it in this story and how Kushina will be teaching him as well. Thank you. Keep up he good work.

Please post the next chapter soon can't wait to see what happens next

Interesting story.

Wow awesome chapter please update real soon i really liked the foreshadowing that you did with that store window and the ten separate tailed beast stuffed animals those being of course 0 through 9

Great beginning. I like the pairing you chose ,I don't think there is a lot of of stories that just has Hinata and Yakumo in the pairing. It was quite funny at the end of the chapter with the little Naruto/Hinata interaction you wrote, Hinata is going to be having an even bigger hero worship than she did in canon I you can have her move on from hero worship to having her truly fall in love with Naruto. I liked the premise of Naruto getting Ashura's chakra manifestation power at an early age and beating the Kumo shinobi by surprise as well, hopefully you won't stunt Naruto growth rate to much for the sake of the plot. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.