Wow keep this beautiful work up

-Reviewer steps out of the shadows- Mystic Summoner, greetings and salutations. Permit me to introduce myself. I am, The Rainwalker, a benevolent and mysterious figure who travels around this sight reading and critiquing stories. And i decided to take a look at yours. Well, let's get top the review!

This was a pretty angst-ridden tale you had here. Ah the classic love that can never be, always one of the best types of angsty tales. At least Set got his just desserts in the end. Hmm, I wonder if there'll be a sequel to this story in present day? Whether there is or isn't I'll leave it up to you to decide that part. As for the grammar and the spelling I must say you've done a great job. You really have a knack for writing and I'm clearly impressed with your skills. Kudos (applause) to you i say kudos, kudos, kudos! oh and by the way congratulations you've been added to my favorites list and I'm eager to see what you come up with next.

Oh, Mystic Summoner, one more thing, if you ever have the time and the inclination I'd like to invite you to come check out my story Yu-Gi-Oh GM Book 1: The Rise of El Loco Desperado. You either type the name 'The Rise of El Loco Desperado' in the search space under story or you can go to my profile to find it. Please feel free to make any comments on my story, as long as they're constructive. Until next time Mystic Summoner, from the land of rain, this is The Rainwalker signing out.