A good three-ish years later and I still enjoy reading this story. :) Thank You!

You know ever since Ace and Luffy got seperated i've been mostly crying and thinking don't worry the happy side of the story is coming because i refuse to believe that those two will not have their happily ever after with shanks as their (foster) father or even whitebeard as Ace's father. So i hope you don't disappoint and you keep writing this amazing story. Excellent work so far keep writing you are an extraordinary writer!

This is really good! the only thing that didn't make sense to me was that sabo never appeared, which, was like, what?! How could you just leave out a third of the asl trio like that? It's horrid! But maybe you just decided to bring sabo into the story later. Anyways, i can't wait to see the rewrite of this story cause I absolutely love it!

I hope your rewrite, because I thought the story was amazing.

This story absolutely made me cry lmfao I really like this story you could alsmot actually see what's going on and feel the emotion especially from luffy

well i can't wait till you re-write it then! i loved it even if you didnt! so the next one i expect to love even more ok? keep up the good work!

Do what you need to do! I love this story and insure I'll love the new version of it. Good luck!

Interested! Very interested! I can't wait!

Good luck rewriting sweetheart! I understand that you'd hate it, not because I hate it myself! but as a writer myself I get hating things you wrote especially when they've gotten a but old and you can see yourself improving and hating what you wrote. so good luck! I cannot wait til the rewritten version because I absolutely fell in love with this fic! I can't wait to see how much better the new one will be mow that you've grown and know better what you like and dislike. I hope you learn a lot! don't be afraid to rewrite and experiment!

Awwww, I really liked it. But you're the artist, you do what you need to, and at least I get to see the wonderful story through! I'll be on the look out for you.

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When does Ace and Luffy meet and stay together?!
I'm dying! T_T too much

luffy is going to school for the first time! now the question at hand is how far he is from his past foster home or if they're just strewn out throughout the same city (ace ace ace ace ace ace ace)

and we find out who zoro lives with now! sword weirdo mihawk i'm laughing, all i can think about is american weeaboos i'm sorry hahahaa

This chapter was so good oh my god ;A; 333 when luffy got upset over ace, aw man aw man that was so gr8 i loved that so much. storming off to his room and it's not nami's words which makes him cry he just misses ace so so much sob... when nami finds him crying and luffy does end up crying again because he wants ace to be there, that was my favourite part without a doubt 33 luffy talking about pirates and nami going along with him and then we find out her age! 13! so 4 years older in this fic! aah i like this a looooot

Oh god the part where zoro left was absolutely heartbreaking ;A; Don't go zoro don't go- ;AAA;

but then! it was time! for a new foster home! and arlong is? surprisingly decent wow? and nami nd usopp aaAAAH! man it looks like things are turning out for the better? that's so nice aaaah, but hey! i'm not complaining if everything turns for the worse either ;) i like this story a lot so it's so exciting that you're back!