Immediately lost me at sharing with Ron. Not reading further.

/Okay, I can see how the HJP shippers would love this chapter.

/It kinda amuses me that you wrote the first three chapters, got good reviews, wrote something to that effect in your bio when you posted the fourth chapter, and now most reviewers say that that chapter ruined the story.

/I'm not very interested in this particular story, but that sequence of events made me curious about all the hubbub, so I read the first chapter.

/With all of the unrealistic representations and sex and relationships on this site, it amuses me that your unfortunately accurate portayals get so much hate.

/We are dealing with so much repressed trauma, as a people.

/I'm not going to continue reading this, but I might read your "Harriet Potter" story. I've skimmed the first chapter, and think it might be interesting. Not sure if I can stomach it, but we'll find out.

/I have some experience in dealing with traumatized people, so sometimes stories like these hit me viscerally.

at first it was plz don't do ron but now shag them all !

Interesting fic, and perhaps a bit more realistic with regards to what young wiches and wizards would be up to in the massive and poorly supervised Hogwarts.

I don't know why I am laughing so much! There 's just something really fun with Hermione' s thought process in this story!

Please do NOT finish this story. This chapter has completely RUINED it for me. It is going bye-bye from my favorites and I am never reading it again. I was having problems with the story BEFORE this chapter, but I pushed through them and ignored them. This chapter, though, was where I drew the line and hit my breaking point. Hermione should have straight-up SLAPPED Harry for offering to share her with Ron, refused to do so, and thoroughly berated Harry for doing something that makes her out to be a whore! Even in the earlier chapters, Hermione was NOT being a good friend to Harry. She should have recognized that he was NOT comfortable doing what she wanted him to do, dropped the subject entirely, moved on, and not brought it up again until he and he alone was comfortable discussing it.

What a hippogriff shit from a pathetic writter it harry was sharing Hermione with Ron u should have added that in your summary as Hermione/Ron u stupid then I would not have read this pathetic piece of shit , you are one pathetic writter and all your stories are proof of it

its to bad you told it all from hermione's pov

This chapter ruined this for me. I get yout logic, but i really do not think its good logic. I would of much have it only harry. And would ok with main pairing being only those two. Thats what it felt like the story was leading towards. Where there might of been real character devlopment after time. Where harry learns what love really is. Now. It just feel wrong and i am kinda disapointed i was liking this for more that the lemons till now.

I just skimmed over this chapter, but there seems to be a mayor logic error... why would they need Polyjuice Potion to infiltrate the Slytherin Common Room and question Malfoy about the Heir of Slytherin in the first place?!
The supposed 7th year Slytherin girl from chapter 1 told already who the Heir of Slytherin was/is! Lord Voldemord. And Harry knows Voldemord is still alive, case solved!

I just skimmed over chapter 5 and 6. But I can say chapter 6 was just a mayor disappointment and ruined any chance this story still had.
Warnings/tags "Genderbender", "HP slash" and "m/m slash" are missing. Just disgusting. Not my cup of tea at all. Especially if it concerns the MC.

The first 3 chapters were good and gave this story potential.
But the 4th chapter took a mayor turn into the wrong direction.
I mean... Hermione LOVES Harry. And she isn't really a fan of Ron. Ron is all about food, chess, quidditch and Chudley Cannons. He likes to bully, brag, is jealous, has no manners, etc.
She may very well hate Ron for all we know.
Hermione can't keep up with Harrys sexual stamina and plans to make HIM a harem.
But suddenly she agrees to Harrys twisted views and is shared by Harry and Ron.
That just doesn't make any sense whatsoever and is disgusting on too many levels. Harry pimping her out without her input...
I would say the warning/tag "Hr/various" is missing.
I still can't wrap my head around the fact that you would give Hermione an additional male partner when she can't even keep up with Harry alone. You ignored everything of the first 3 chapters and did the exact opposide. Like from an entirely different author. A shame...

ANNNND this story just got ruined for me...

Went from cute akward story of harry develop more emotion based off sex. And his past abuses history to hermione let ron fuck her. Like really it's just sucks now, I'm dropping it.

This is heading well into what the fuck territory.