Reviews for Make Him Give Up
Your fan chapter 14 . 3/5/2019
I love your work!
Everyone of them, your fanfics are amazing. It is a pity that there are some discontinued or left because I really wanted to read more of them.
I really love YuuRam, so I'm looking for good fanfics and when I find a good one I always look at its writer work and I can you are a good writer.
I'll be looking forward your fanfics actualization and your next work.
Thanks for your hard work.
STLyrica chapter 14 . 8/21/2017
The story is so well thought of! I'm quite sad that it's discontinued but I must say, this is a great story! The beginning really made me cry. .
rokudaime09 chapter 14 . 11/2/2016
Oh man! These was great! It's hard to find a story with essence and craetive plot like these especially tackling the possibility of yuuri's emotions concerning his engagement as well as wolfram! The plot was great and was sooooooo looking forward to it chapter by chapter! Just wished you would have continued it! I wanna know more of yuuri feelings in these story as well as wolfram and what of hana is she really going to give up? Waaaaa huhuhu so saaad that these is the end.
michikuchi chapter 14 . 10/25/2016
Awwwww no more chapters :( hix hix hix
Guest chapter 14 . 10/13/2016
why? I always waited for updates of your excellent fic. I love it! I hope you decide come back.
Bbnov chapter 14 . 4/29/2016
Sorry to hear that this story is discontinued it was a really wonderful fic, but thank you for sharing it whit us
Guest chapter 14 . 4/25/2016
why this keeps happening to every good fic i start reading?. . . . . .
SweetHeaven chapter 14 . 4/23/2016
OOOHHH so Hana is finally back and now everyone's feelings are in the open!
Hmm, I didn't like the way she acted with Mikari, but at the same time I feel a bit sorry for her because, well, she knew she made a mistake and she regrets it. It's not as if we must hate every person who makes a mistake, so I cannot really hate her. Also, I feel sad for her, because she loves Yuuri and for some time Yuuri acted as if he felt the same way, giving her some hope. What I mean is, whatever was happening between Yuuri and Hana was not only Hana's fault, as Yuuri was kinda leading her on.
It was a sad scene, but I'm glad you wrote it, because I think they needed some sort of closure. besides, even though Hana was not perfect, at least her feelings for Yuuri were honest, which is something I like, because there are so many stories in which the girl who gets between Yuuri and Wolfram is someone who doesn't love Yuuri and has ulterior motives to approach him, or is someone who is a bitch to everyone but Yuuri doesn't see it... I understand people write it like that because they don't want to create a nice OC who is going to suffer when Yuuri leaves her for Wolfram, but still, it's nice to find a story in which the girl's feeling are genuine.

The part with Yuuri in front of the mirror, washing off the lipstick, felt really meaningful to me, like, very symbolic in a way. It felt as a way to erase the past, he's washing off Hana and all the implications that their relationship had (that Yuuri was fed up with Wolf, that he wouldn't mind cheating, etc.), so it feels to me as if it's Yuuri way of marking a new beginning. But I tend to overthink stuff, so i could be wrong LOL

I've enjoyed the last part very much. I like seeing Wolfram taking part on earth activities with Yuuri's gang, it is funny and feels nice.

And I've absouletely loved the kiss part! The description of what they were feeling and what it meant to them was really good, and besides, i love the idea of a daring Yuuri who had the courage to kiss Wolfram in public. Well, not exactly in public for everyone to see, but in a public place and not in the privacy of a dark room, as if they were doing something wrong.

And OMG I just noticed the edit at the end and it's from yesterday. I'm really sad the story is definitely discontinued... :(
All the best.
Michikuchi chapter 14 . 4/18/2016
Thank goodness u updated! I was hopeless, when u put Discontinoued :'( please update soon again, can't wait to see how it ends for wolfram.. Hope the best for him, he wanted to give up but still couldn't do it. Wolfram is my most fav character ever in KKM :)
Guest chapter 14 . 4/17/2016
~sigh for it takes such a long time to come to this point.
Love wolf and hope everything turns out in his favour.
Fairytail.523 chapter 14 . 4/17/2016
I feel bad for Hana but she kinda deserves it for treating Mikari badly. But at least Yuuri finally has drawn a line with his relationship with Hana. Yay~ Progress for YuuramD I reread this from the start and I still feel a bit bitter at Yuuri but I can see how hard he is trying to make up for his past mistakes. I kinda wanna see him jelly tho. Just a tiny bit of payback. But all in all, I love how the story is progressing. I love how Yuuri and Wolfy is reconciling and slowly getting closer. I like the pace. Not too fast, not too slow. I love their fluffy moments. Keep up the great work. Please update soon ne
Fuuka95 chapter 14 . 4/16/2016
yuuri u have to do a lot of things before wolfram really forgive u..btw thanks for update..love it :3
Nickesha chapter 13 . 4/1/2016
Oh my word!
SweetHeaven chapter 13 . 3/29/2016
Yay! A new chapter!

Thanks for the shot-out :) I agree, it's great to see there are still people interested in this show. I don't know, I understand it was not the best anime out there but it was funny and it was easy to love the characters. And I believe it was the perfect seed for wonderful fics, like this one, that can explore all the things that the anime left unsolved. And Yuuram will always be one of my favourite pairs :)

Now, about the chapter:
I loved the detail of Wolfram secretly keeping one of Yuuri's hoodies, it was so very sweet.

Wolfram's first day at university was a fun read, especially the part when he copied down everything the professor was saying. It reminded me of a good friend of mine who did the same lol

I felt that Hana was quite present in this chapter, even though she didn't appear. First she sent the gif to Yuuri, which means she might be eager to keep in touch, especially now that she broke up with Mikari. Yuuri's reaction, not wanting to tell Wolf who sent the message, and Wolf understanding that if Yuuri is keeping the information for himself it's because he didn't want Wolf to know it was Hana, were really meaningful details. If Shori hadn't insisted on knowing, Yuuri would have never revealed it, which means, I believe, that he still feels kind of conflicted about the way he should act around Hana now that he has decided to give his relationship with Wolf a try, but still wants to be friends with her, even though he knows she has romantic feelings for him.
And then we have Kioshi's comments, encouraging Yuuri to date Hana. I think it was good that Yuuri could use the excuse that he doesn't want to date the ex-girlfriend of a friend, because otherwise it would have been difficult to explain why he doesn't want to date a hot , nice girl with whom he has awesome chemistry without admitting that he's already in a relationship with someone else. Koishi seems to be quite perceptive, anyway, so he might figure something is up...

The new guy, Ryuzaki, seems nice and I wonder if he will become freiiends with Wolf.

Conrad's arrival was such a surprise! But I'm glad to see him. I've really enjoyed his reunion with Wolf, and I'm super glad that you have made Yuuri awkward around him. It would have been bad if you had totally disregarded Yuuri's behaviour in the past just because he's getting along so well with Wolfram now, so I'm really happy you have shown how uncomfortable it must be for Yuuri to deal with Conrad after all the things he said in the past and for which he hasn't apologised.

The last part was so cute and the little kiss was such a nice touch, it was exciting and I think that the fact that they feel shy and unsure about it even when they both want it feels very realistic.

I've enjoyed this chapter very much!

And on a totally unrelated note, I just found out through your A/N that you started a KKM/Kuroshitsuji crossover. It's a shame it's definitely discontinued, because Kuroshitsuji is my favourite manga!
Fuuka95 chapter 13 . 3/26/2016
yuriiiii i outh to killll you! but still great chapter always
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