| Reviews for Ben 10 vs The Greatest in the Universe |
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Donovan Alexzandr chapter 1 . 1/28 Ben will have no problem with defeating Frieza. Maybe at first he will. I bet Ben will scan Frieza. "Uncataloged Mutant Freezian DNA detected. DNA acquired!" - Omnitrix. |
Lord Black Hat chapter 2 . 8/21/2019 Ben's about to get raped. |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2017 Just please don't make Ben 10 characters get defeated easily by frieza's army. Make Jetray or astrodactyl defeat almost all of frieza's army, let humungousaur or even ones like nrg and feedback deal with the strongest ones. And finally make ATOMIX fight with frieza and LET HIM OVERPOWER FRIEZA, make him on par with 2nd form frieza. Let Ben's other partners like rook, Gwen, Kevin, plumbers helpers fight and try to HANDLE 3rd form frieza. And finally, give Ben a new alien to defeat 4th form frieza. Also, make Ben try alien X only to realise that once again alien X is no more under his control. Oh, and also include galactic enforcers in this story who will try to stop frieza's army from attacking earth, and shit... Please use my ideas please please please... |
Hawkcam1996 chapter 2 . 2/1/2016 Great story idea, I can't wait to see how you'll have Ben deal with the overwhelming power of Frieza's men, or if you'll just downsize their power so they're not so OP. I think having him deal with their power without making them weaker would be more interesting, but it's your story. |
Brandon Vortex chapter 1 . 6/13/2015 ohhh do pls continued this! |
Cody chapter 1 . 6/8/2015 Good job on the first chapter, I'll be waiting for more chapters. |
Colossal the Omega chapter 1 . 4/28/2015 I really hope you update this story now. I find the battle that will eventually happen with Frieza and Ben Tennyson a liking to see Ben actually may have meet his match or equal to strength, power and anything else for the matter. |
Mr.Jodrick chapter 1 . 4/27/2015 I'm curious to see how it comes along, Ben wouldn't be much of a challenge without alien x tho. Unless he gets an dbz alien by scanning one. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2015 I implore you to not abandon this story it has great potential. I truely wish to see how Ben will fare against Freiza's forces. It does sound like Freiza to want to destroy anything that would pose a threat to his empire. Although I'm curious if we will see Saiyans in this story. With so many questions and so much potential there is every reason for you to continue this story. So I beg of you again to carry on with this story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2015 I like the idea you have. Although I wonder if you plan to give Ben the ability to fuse his aliens in this story. Regardless I look forward to the next chapter. |