listening to it's good to be alive by skillet as I read the end, and it works out so well

oh hell.

ohmygods i love this so much,, i love your writing style and how you brought the characters to life shshdhshsh the fluff, the angst, the familial love aaaaa and the last scene w hiccup and maraud aAAA! Thank u for this adventure!

Omg this is perfect im in love

Love this story, but was confuzled when the names changed.

that was an excellent job

Cause anyone can hit a target she hit a Mordue so like ten bullseyes

Well that's nice Hiccup, is feeling better and-*see the enchanted tart* Well...this obviously won't end in disaster.

I hope everything works out for Hiccup and I love the story!

I love this story!

I can't even keep track of what's happening any more. And I'm pretty sure she would know what a horse was. And was that even a language you had her say?

I'm getting confused! One minute she's hugging her dad, then the next second she's wandering around! There's no clear indication of a change of scene!

She could've used her dragon call to find him.

So wait, the Queen didn't even notice Hiccup's leg? And I think Hiccup would be able swim just fine even with her prosthetic.

This is an interesting start.