your an amazing person who shold share her talent of writing,I believe your an amazing person from the way you write .I can tell youve had trama in your life i belive you can turn that into a beautiful thing

-tramiztized 12yr

spriggan...KIRITO TAKE ME WITH yuO.../

rin..satan..GEHENNA

its double n not double a

I'M SO SAD THIS IS SO GOOD BUT IT ISN'T CONTINUING HURRY UP COME ON

aww i liked this story a lot and it seems that it isn't going to continue

Hope your continuing this because it is amazing i hope t see every ones reaction when they find out who lucy loves.

This was a fantastic read well done

Ahhh, Zeref! Is this going to be Nalu or Zerlu?

You are an amazing author and most fairy tail
Fanfiction are cringy, sappy yours on the other hand is not like the others

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

Will there be more?

They are called the black arts

'Corruption in my magic' not 'corruptedness in my magic.'
'important existence in/addition to Team Natsu' not 'important existence to Team Natsu'. (I think. I may be wrong about this one.)
' anything else you're curious about about me, with an extra about. Not 'anything else you're curious about me?'.
'motioned for her to follow him' instead of 'motioned her to follow him'.
This is the first ZerLu I've ever read, and I think It's great!
P.S. I am a perfectionist too...and my friends say that it's not a good thing...

Pls update