Well, some one thinks highly of herself. One would think Lady Deathstrike might have the means of tracking and investigating anything related to adamantium which would allow her to know about the Weapon X project, The Facility, and anything else that might involve her father's legacy. Just saying.

As for Deadpool, somehow I doubt Wolverine would go for that.

I like the concept but everything bounces around and is hard to follow. There's no coherence to the flow of the story.

ok now i am confused on how Dom and Wade ended up in that situation because they should have been a tad smarter then suddenly backing out openly or whatever, but thats fine. Also Charlie is the Weasly who lives in Romania not Bill, he is the one who works for Gringotts

a good chapter for context, also Deadpool being Deadpool is always good fun

i am so confused on what Sam knows and what she doesn't because wasn't she told by Logan who she would be protecting? also Gamesmaster? i can only think of a totally different person in regards to that title in regards to what they do and how

well this is a clusterfuck building up to explode, also i am never sure on how Sam will react to things cause she is a tad spurattic in her actions though understandably so

does she have the stone on her or something? or is it a psychic thing for being connected to Jean? Cause that bit confused the hell out of me

ok i often forget that even though Jean is often the team mom/big sis she is also a teenager that makes dumb choices, but nice work on developing Rouge's character and Sam's

i expected Sam to punch Scott in the face for breaking into her house, everyone else can be excused for simply following along but he is the one who did it and blasted her in the face. Scott is an up tight ass and deserves a punch to the face, honestly i was kinda expecting it to be more angst then it is, and i am surprisingly pleased with being disappointed

ok so the bit within the Facility was confusing narrative/reading wise that i felt somewhat lost reading and what the heck is her relation with X-23 like have they even met or whatever but it improved from there and i love the fact that Strange is there

This entire story made no sense. Too much X-Men and these are the most fucking annoying versions of them. Xavier and Dumbledore getting stupid kids who want to be adults to fight.

Jean is one of those stupid girls who once they discover dicks lose their damn mind.
Scott potential future abusive husband like he is in canon.
Rogue wont mind her own fucking business.

This type of crossover rarely goes well.
Looking forward to the rewrite.

...all this forgive and forget wishi washy in all storys is really annoying me -.-

special branch mi-5 is internal investigations of high needs in Britain

I think you missed that who ever posted pool-o-vision was refrenceing deadpool.

Her attitude is too trusting for being kidnapped at least twice and held prisoner at least thrice especially with her starting that she doesn't trust anybody. Also, why didn't she get a wand when she went to Gringotts?