| Reviews for Essence |
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   Omnipotent97 chapter 12 . 7/16 Sad to see this fic die. |
| TheCrazedValkyrie chapter 12 . 7/14 OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh |
| TheCrazedValkyrie chapter 5 . 7/14 friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' friggin' |
| Tenjo chapter 4 . 6/30 While it can get annoying reading stories that only use the most basic of words, reading stories where it looks as though the author whips out their thesaurus every other word can be equally as annoying. I suspend my extremity and extend the foremost, stingiest digit at the patented owner of this chronicle. That’s basically what reading this story can feel like at times and that’s without mentioning that in what I assume to be an attempt to avoid repetitive word use, you still use the same words over and over, and it’s more noticeable because the words stand out. Despite that, I‘m still loving the story. |
| Leafyeyes417 chapter 12 . 6/25 It makes me sad when such a well written work like this doesn’t get finished. I hate that real life intrudes and causes it to happen. Hope you can come back to this, or at least let us know what’s going on. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4 Nice job,you getting married |
| akinomatis chapter 11 . 5/31 Any chance of you picking up the story again? I really like it, and I hope to see more. I’m really excited about Ash getting to the Safari zone, I hope you find something cool there. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/3 it's amazing and I can't wait for more |
| OtakuChan4Life chapter 12 . 4/15 Gosh, I love Pokemon fanfiction were Ash is a mature trainer. No romance/harem or overpowered god-like ability. Is a nice change and one of my favourite stories, good job. |
| Arkinstone chapter 12 . 4/7 I just binged all of this and I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/27 Hoping to read more someday! |
| panther73110 chapter 6 . 1/14 Rereading your story again. Love it and hope you plan to come back and finish it someday |
| FF-loverHP1 chapter 12 . 1/12 great story... to bad its dead |
| pyrogreninja chapter 6 . 12/2/2019 Heyo! This is a great story and a lot of moves and training are VERY well explained. Like, seriously what did you do for a living? But hey all that aside I have a question. How the hell does it look like for Haunter to be in Ash’s shadow? I mean, how does he see, what can he see? It’s a very interesting line of questions. |
| George1892 chapter 3 . 11/26/2019 Not going to lie, I'm a bit disappointed he got all the Kanto starters. When the fic started and he turned them down to go for a Growlithe instead it was such an interesting move that I thought it would be cool to see a fic without Ash/Pikachu/Charisse's/Venasaur/Blastoise etc. Then he caught a Clefairy which was a really unusual and interesting choice. Then he got given 3 starters, all who have had trouble with people, all who will have similar issues. It just seems... wrong. Removing the carry limit might help though. Have to see how that goes. |
