Please add more to the story I just love it finally Fili gets to survive and I just love that there's another skin changer really enjoyed the whole plot line in the development of the characters thank you for this

Wonderful.
Update immediately, please!

Good story, but just to let you know, Sauron was the servant of Morgoth. It says so in the book.

A BABY? How did that happen? (let me rephrase that) WHEN did that happen? A bit of time must have passed since the last chapter I read, ha ha.
Legolas does not seem too upset, that is good.
Hold her hand Fili and if she turns into a wolf and bites you...well, you probably deserved it. ha ha.

Hey I just stumbled across this story but it looks like it could be really good. I love the idea and I'm looking forward to seeing how you fit her into the book/movie plot

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! *runs around frantically* WHERE ARE THE DAMN MAIDS!? AREN'T THEY SUPPOSED TO BE HERE FOR THIS EXACT PURPOSE!? FRAG IT I'LL DO IT MYSELF! Water, warm towels, other towels to wipe away sweat, more towels to wipe away the blood, MAKE SURE THAT WATER IS WARM!, blankets for the baby and Averi, WHERE THE FRAG ARE THOSE MAIDS!? *tears Erebor apart* THE FRAGGING QUEEN IS GIVING BIRTH AND THERE AREN'T ANY FRAGGING HANDMAIDENS!? WHAT KIND OF KINGDOM IS THIS!?

Fili...don't pull when you braid! ha ha.
And wow, that was some real smackdown Fili laid out...and then allowed Legolas to have her later? Wow...I would have been like "NEVER HIM" ha ha.
Guess Fili is just kinder than me.

SQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *hugs* I'm soooo glad you updated! I've missed this story so much!
Don't apologize about ANYTHING of this chapter. Scratch that: of ANY of your work. It's amazing. :D
I'm a little dry on ideas myself, but if I have anything I'll let you know. :D

1: Okay. *situates myself on bed with steaming cup of Raspberry tea* Let's do this. *starts reading*
2: *twitches angrily* Avvvvveeeeeerrrrriiiiii... *starts trying to find her* Whre are you dammit!? Get yo ass out here RIGHT NOW!
3: Oh Fili... *hugs him* Don't worry. You have your brother, your mother, and the support of the Company. I know what you're going through is hard, believe me I know, but if there is also one thing I know, it's that you Dwarves are stubborn as hell. You never let anything get you down for long periods of time. You rise up and meet the challenge head on. And I have faith you'll do the same now. (Did I seriously just give a motivational speech to a fictional character?)
4: Do it, do it, do it, do it, *starts pumping arms up and down while chanting*
5: Oh my... *covers mouth with hands* He did it. He did it!
6: UGH! My favorite Christmas song, which just happens to be full of feels, just came on AS I'm reading the confession! Now I'm definitely going to cry! Dammit!
7: Dammit! Dammit dammit dammit! This song is going to be the death of me!
8: YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!1 Never mind I love you song! *kisses radio* THAT WAS FUCKING PERFECT! *total fangirl mode, complete with laughing and squealing* About fucking time! *dances*
9: Now all that's left is for Averi to confess and then I can die happy. (Not really.)
10: *reading kiss scene* Tooo... freaking... peeerrrrrrrrrfect! *giggles* "Could it be walnuts?" *giggles* Ugh Fili is just... *makes squishing movements with hands* Gah!
11: YEAS! *fistpumps multiple times* Finally! *dances in a circle, humming* DadadadaDA! DadadadadaDA! I can hear the wedding bells! XDDDDDDD
12: *squeals* First comes love, then comes marriage, THEN COMES LITTLE BABIES! *daydreams like Mirajane* Too cute! Go get her Fili! Show how much you love her! *dances while squealing and fangirling*
13: *glomps you* YOu are the most amazing wonderful perfect awesome spectacular amazing- did I already say that? *shrugs* I think you get the idea. THANK YOU! I've been looking forward to this for EVER! And you delivered beautifully! It's about damn time Fili and Averi confessed! Oh my Mahal that had me on the edge of my seat the ENTIRE time! And that kiss was just... gah! *melts* Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! Thank you thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU!
I forgot to say this on my last review, but a VERY Merry Christmas to you, my friend.! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a spectacular New Year! *blows kiss* You're amazing! :D

Oh thank goodness they just both laid it on the table, no lies, no selfless acts of leaving to save the other, nope, they said they loved each other and then dealt with it.
And come on, how could you ever leave that sweet dwarf boy?
I think Fili will make an awesome king with her by his side.
And I think it is more than just puppy love, it is the true blue thing! Durin blue even!
Now where are they going? I hope it is to a wedding and not just his bed, ha ha. Not that I am sure she would complain about that, but her dad might!

This is a great story! I love your OC and how she fits in the plot. I like that she has an impact on the plotline but you still stay loyal to the characters and the story. Update soon please! :)

Oh how we love to put our characters through the emotional wringer, right? I once had Kili suggest to Fili that he just TALK to the girl in one of my stories and my beta almost flipped out, screaming "NO YOU CANT DO THAT, IT GOES AGAINST ALL LAWS OF FF WRITING!" Ha ha. So I can't wait to see what Fili does, because I KNOW that is who is following her, or Kili on a mission FOR Fili. ha ha.
Can't wait...so much drama!

I love your story! Can't wait till the next update :)

1: Waaahhh! Don't leave Fili, Averi! He needs you!
2: Somehow, I think that if they HAD kissed, she wouldn't be leaving him. *shrugs* Oh well.
3: Haha! At least she can laugh. I know I wouldn't be able to.
4: Dis... *hugs her* There there, dear heart. *hugs her tighter*
5: *smiles softly* I'm glad Averi has a friend in Legolas. And I'm glad he has a friend in her. Both need someone like that. I just hope Legolas finds love eventually.
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IDEA! But I'll work on that after I finish this chapter.
6: HOW DO THEY NOT RECOGNIZE HER!? (Uh... cause the Mountain didn't have any servants when they reclaimed it?) Oh. Right. *lightly hits self on forehead* Silly me.
7: *heart's beating so fast I can barely breathe* What's gonna happen?! *barely contains squeal*
8: Waaaaaaaiiiiiiit... She can see Aragorn's future? Cool. :D
9: Crap, crap, crrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaap! I'm gonna die if Fili chooses a queen! *pulls at hair* Ow.
10: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *pulls at hair again* *freaking out too much to come up with a coherent response*
11: NOOOOOO! WHY did you have to remind me that Thorin is dead!? *breaks down crying*
THAT. IS. IT! I'm writing my own Hobbit story so Thorin DOESN'T die! END! OF! STORY!
12: *smiles wildly* Okay. I'm thrilled that Erebor has a deserving King, I'll give you that. I never forgave Tolkien for killing off the entire line of Durin.
13: *reads that one. Little. Stand alone. Sentence* *eyes widen to the size of dinner plates* Oh... holy... sh!t. He's gonna see her, isn't he?
14: "Double take" cliche. *says like the guys from CinemaSins* YOU DUMBASS! *whacks Fili over the head* How could you NOT recognize her!? It's only been a fucking MONTH!
15: "Little did she know she was being..." YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSs! *grabs Kili, shaking him wildly* He's going after her! Fili's going after her! *squeezes Kili half to death* GO GET HER FILI! *continues screaming in joy and jumping up and down*
16 (Actual review): Holy crap, Holy Crap, HOLY CRAP! *screams, arms flailing before digging fingernails into scalp* Damn I can't even type right now! GO GET HER FILI! BRING THAT IDIOT AVERI BACK AND KISS HER SENSELESS SO SHE NEVER LEAVES YOU AGAIN! GO, GO, GO, GO, GO! *continues chanting*
To everyone else, FUCKING REVIEW! THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND SUBLIME SHOULD KNOW THAT!
It's true! Hopefully people will review so I... er... We? Yeah, we, can know what's gonna happen!

Oh gosh that was good. The time lapses were not so difficult to follow but I wish you hadn't of left there, I'm so tempted to leave 6 reviews on my own just so I can read more lol