WOWOWOWOW BEST STORY EVER OMGGG

This was really good! I've only just read it, and I enjoyed how you changed everything to a more realistic modern AU.

This was seriously amazing. I've been trying to find au's like this (real life/fosterhome things) and this was so great! You really did the characters proud and I love how you made Chopper their very clever family dog; that was exactly how I always saw him in a real-life fic :D
The story arc with Zeb's family and the inquisitor was amazingly well thought out and the way you incorperated scenes from the actual series into your own story was just so well done! I really, really love this and it's definitely one of my favourite Star Wars Rebels fanfics!

oh, never mind! there're the sideburns we all love to hate!

wait...was the chop muttonchops? (or as you know him, Agent Kallus)

I don't get it.

This fic has no emotion. We have to be told everything. Why is Ezra so attached it seems to ke he's an outsider looking in.

We don't get anyone bonding with the kid, Sabine is distant but then she is in the show, but same with Zeb we don't seem him rough housing or asking how Ezras day was or just checking in on him.

As for Hera and Kanan they' re just there, gentle when they are but... No clothes shopping no helping him with homework. No sign of that tutor. No teaching him to cook or giving him chores the only time he gets any attention is when something bad happpens.

There has been no real attempt to get to know the kid or really take care of him. No doctor after injuies no dentist after 8 years on the street to no help with homework. No quiet bonding moments where they just interact we're told Kana and Hera are nice but i still have yet to see them do much beyond provide food and shelter. This attempt at baseball is it. And they didn't even bother asking if he's into any sports or if he has any interest it felt half hearted seems like you're relying on readers to project what we already know from the show rather then build these Characters up.

That doesn't work in an AU

Zeb says Ezra reminds him of his brother, did he ignore his brother and never talk or hang out with him? We haven't seen any beotherly behaviour beyond not wanting kid to die and that's more decent human being then brother.

There is no family unit here. At least not one Ezra is a part of.

Also why no authorities? In the show it makes sense the bad guys are the authorities but here?

… I don’t know what to say, other than wow. Just wow. This is an incredible Modern AU. Seriously, it’s amazing! I love it! I would very much like to see a Season 2 sequel. (But then, please, with Ahsoka’s name spelt right.)

wait, did Ezra die?

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This was great! I'm sad that it's over though.

Sequal for season two? Please! This was one of my two absolutely favorite Star Wars Rebels fanfic. And one of my all time favorites. It made me so happy to see you up date. I love it so much. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASEEEEE!

I love this story overLl, it was great how u tried to go along with the first season with the chapter. I am a bit sad to see this story end, it was a great modern adventure!

Awesome chapter :-) :-D

THIS WAS AWESOME! I'm sad that it's over but you did an amazing job! Keep up the great work and may the force be with you, always!
-Superherotiger

Love this fan fiction! I can't wait for the next chapter!