| Reviews for A New Time (Re-write) |
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   Beth5572 chapter 7 . 8/4 I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. I also hope you can keep Riley-Mae and littles ones safe and happy with everything going on. Thank you and Please, Terri |
| Pinkypi chapter 4 . 8/2 so, it feels good but it's hella cheesey making it also feel disjointed considering both of their past telling the brain yo this isn't how they'd behave even if they fell in love that fast. |
| SLYNNR chapter 7 . 6/7 WAIT TILL LITTLE LUCY MEETS THE AVENGERS. IRON MAN ALONE WILL PUL EVERY BLOND HAIR FROM HIS HEAD. BUT PERSONALLY I SUSPECT THE WIDOW WOULD BE THE BEST TO DEAL WITH HIM! |
| 666Neko chapter 7 . 6/5 great chapter thanks for the update |
| Elfin69 chapter 7 . 6/5 Would love to see Tony and the Avengers go after Lucius before he can even get close to her and Morgan. Maybe have Narcissa let them know where he is and make it so that Kingsley and them also go after him. |
| deathwearsblack chapter 7 . 6/5 great chapters. |
| lilly-flower15 chapter 7 . 6/5 great chapter update soon |
| skyeza chapter 6 . 10/19/2019 This was so sweet. Loved it. Will there be a next part? I'm hoping that you will continue |
| Elfin69 chapter 6 . 6/26/2019 Will Lucius find out that the baby was born and try to come claim it only to run into the Avengers? I wonder how long before Tony blood adopts her. |
| 12456237-DeleteAccountPlease chapter 6 . 6/19/2019 Wow update soon please. |
| AnimeLover229 chapter 1 . 5/14/2019 I hate rape stories. |
| gfgjfjrjj chapter 6 . 5/8/2019 great story, thanks ;) will tony blood adobt little morgan? can't wait for more :) |
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 6 . 5/7/2019 I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it. |
| Entertainment lover chapter 6 . 5/7/2019 Nice chapter. the scene between riley and tony was cute.I loved how tony is taking care of her. morgan Lillian stark is finally here. so her original father is lucius malfoy |
| Where's My Shoe chapter 6 . 5/5/2019 I tried to read this. I couldn't. The story moves way too fast and Tony is so OOC it's downright cringey. And there are too many plot holes that ruin an otherwise great story. How does Riley go a whole month without knowing what JARVIS is but in the same amount of time fall in love with Tony and have him integrated into her and Teddy's lives so easily? I understand you wanted the birth moment and all that but in doing so, you crammed too much stuff into a 4 month timeline. If you just moved the pregnancy back things wouldn't have been so rushed and everyone would be more in character. I really want to love this story but the best thing I can see for this story is another rewrite with a beta or two. |
